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2006-Nov-29 @ 3:16 AM
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779	Post General Comments to the Contributor Here. ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2007-Aug-25 @ 7:43 AM
Michael Beck Tipsy Member since 2007-Aug-25 Posts: 6	Any reason why no "Broken Wings"? I was surprised not to see "Broken Wings" here. Any reason for that? ----- Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2007-Aug-27 @ 9:54 AM
Imagineer Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-27 Posts: 214	Sighs Well, see, I wasn't supposed to be stuck in a rut this long. There's this other story I'm trying to do before Vanishing Point, which is the sequel to Broken Wings. This other story got stuck, so I flailed around a bit and eventually dove into Winter's Blade, which is, well, stuck. I don't like how Broken Wings ends. No, that's not true. I don't like that Broken Wings is the end. So the plan's been not to repost it anywhere until I'd started on Vanishing Point. Then there's Cruel Summer, which came before Broken Wings, which... requires hand-coding HTML to post anywhere, a task I've been meaning to get around to here, but without Vanishing Point started... There's also the not-insignificant issue of providing a proper preface that excuses/exalts Cruel Summer as the early work it is. It's a house of cards, isn't it? A litany of lameness. I suck. I'll try to suck less. ----- Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2007-Aug-27 @ 2:33 PM
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752	Why, exactly, does Cruel Summer need to be hand-coded? Perhaps I can script something to alleviate the pain... Do it with my own work all the time... Net Wolf ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2007-Aug-28 @ 10:10 AM
Michael Beck Tipsy Member since 2007-Aug-25 Posts: 6	Imagineer, I wish I sucked half as much as you. ----- Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2007-Sep-1 @ 7:48 AM
Michael Beck Tipsy Member since 2007-Aug-25 Posts: 6	That didn't come out quite right ----- Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2008-Feb-1 @ 12:17 AM
megamaster87 Tipsy Member since 2008-Jan-30 Posts: 6	Cruel Summer Awesome story. Started reading it, only to find I couldn't stop. One question though... Angela had to take her crystals off and keep them in the dark, how did Val do that if they were welded on? ----- Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2008-Feb-1 @ 12:32 AM
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752	This comment should be posted in the story thread, as should any reply. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2009-Apr-13 @ 4:32 PM
bingo2009 Tipsy Member since 2009-Apr-11 Posts: 2	amazing, it's as if angel blade copied it ----- Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2009-Apr-25 @ 11:39 PM
Imagineer Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-27 Posts: 214	Angel Blade... wow, that's some kinky stuff I'd never heard of it before. Such a sheltered life... ----- Report This Post \| Quote This Post

Imagineer is:

1. not now, nor has he ever been a member of the Disney party;

2. a reference to (a) the creative technicality that underlies most of this writer's stories, and (b) the vexing fastidiousness of the internal devil's advocate that both enables and hinders creative output;

3. unapolagetically recidivistic in the use of alliteration, sentence fragmentation, and flowery prose for effect;

4. in almost constant cogitation concerning confluent creativity and continuity on some struggling or stalled but not stagnant story;

5. not writing enough.

Herein lie tales of hope against darkness.