great story!

I just wanted to drop in and say that I really like your work! "Potential" is a great series!

Hey bistander...good to see you here.

Sensualist wrote:

Hey bistander...good to see you here.

I should be saying that since I've been here longer, but I'm sorry to say I just saw this message. I hope you're having hurt here.

Really like this story can’t wait for the next chapter.

dvahor wrote:

Really like this story can’t wait for the next chapter.

Perhaps this should have been posted to an actual story thread, then?

Eric Storm

Potential

I AM HOOKED!  Like an addict I anxiously await the next chapter. Great story and well written.

Mindreader wrote:

Potential

I AM HOOKED!  Like an addict I anxiously await the next chapter. Great story and well written.

Just a procedural note:  This comment should have been posted directly to the story's discussion thread: Potential Discussion Thread

Eric Storm

Thank you

Hi, I have been following your 2 long running stories on another site and now here. Your posts here are current and not censored. I find both of these stories to be interesting and enjoy following them. I confess, you have me hooked. I want to say how much I appreciate your efforts. Writing anything is not easy. Keeping two different story lines running concurrently has to be a challenge. I am looking forward to your next chapter(s) of Potential. Thank you again for sharing your stories with us.

Stretchlace wrote:

Thank you

Writing anything is not easy.

Ain't that the truth. Thank you for taking the time to comment. I love to hear from readers. I wish I could post more often to give people more opportunities to comment, but life takes up so much time.

I'm not actually writing both of those. Writing Potential now, but only cleaning up My Neighbor's Incest. Although, that has proven to be a lot more work than I expected. At first I was just fixing errors that Grammarly and Google docs picked up. Then I realized how horrible my early work was, and started making a few changes when I saw something that was hard to follow. At one point while proofreading I was confused about what was going on, and I wrote the story, so I had to fix it up.

Greetings Bistander

I have written but not yet submitted a few stories that I would call fictional. Like yours they draw from real people and events in my life with actual names, locations, dates changed.

I'm writing here because something in your bio struck a nerve. Like you Ethel grew up with a severe learning disability (dyslexia) that went completely untreated. It is something that changed the course of our lives.

We hope all is better than good with you and look forward to reading your work.

Fred and Ethel

Phredd wrote:

I'm writing here because something in your bio struck a nerve. Like you Ethel grew up with a severe learning disability (dyslexia) that went completely untreated. It is something that changed the course of our lives.

We hope all is better than good with you and look forward to reading your work.

Fred and Ethel

Hello and thank you for reaching out.

Stories drawn from and based on actual events along with writing what you know make the best stuff. I hope you'll get some stuff written and posted.

I agree, it does change the course of our lives. That might sound drastic, but it is true. I could write a book on all the way feeling stupid and trying to hide it or compensate for not being able to spell and read has fucked up my life. I'm grateful after so many years I took a stab at writing. I'm a great storyteller, but the effort required to get it out pushes me to the brink of giving up often. Technology has helped. Things like Grammarly, even though you can't expect it to be correct, catch enough stuff and gives educational help when it finds something it thinks is wrong.

Good luck you you

Good writing

bistander
I started reading your stories on another site. I was happy to find this one to be able to continue reading your stories. You are a gifted writer and I hope you continue to write more and finish the stories you have started.
Thank you for sharing your gifted writing with me

Fred73

Hello Bistander

             Love your writing. Just wondering if you have an estimate of when the next chapter of Potential will be posted?

please

please continue with this story I would like to know what part you truly Play in it.

Potential

Love the story please let it continue

Johnnycat69 wrote:

Potential

Love the story please let it continue

Just FYI, there is a forum thread specific to this story, where this should have been posted.

Eric Storm

Nice

Thank you for this long awaited chapter. I love your writing and hope to see more soon.  Hope next chapter starts out with John falling down the stairs and breaking his neck...  oops... that slipped out... lol

Zmaybe wrote:

Nice

Hope next chapter starts out with John falling down the stairs and breaking his neck...  oops... that slipped out... lol

Like that would be bad enough to satisfy everybody's need for retribution?

Thank you for taking the time to let me know you're reading and enjoying my work.

I think this comment would be better in the Potential section next time.

Have a great day

Perhaps if there were large nails sticking out of the stairs, with a hungry alligator waiting at the bottom?

Eric Storm

A heartfelt THANK YOU to you! 

On the other site (no I don't mention it here since you can't point directly to The Mystic Wolf Pub there anymore neither) when I was searching chapter 6 of your story 'Potential' you directed your readers to a less censored place and I am grateful for this. Without your direction The Mystic Wolf Pub had stayed a mystery to me. I never came across it before.

Thank you again and good luck to you!

RJules3 wrote:

On the other site (no I don't mention it here since you can't point directly to The Mystic Wolf Pub there anymore neither)...

Just curious, what is the nature of the policy that forbids mentioning The Pub there?  (Obviously, I don't go there... not even sure where there is, actually.  )

Eric Storm

Eric Storm wrote:

RJules3 wrote:

On the other site (no I don't mention it here since you can't point directly to The Mystic Wolf Pub there anymore neither)...

Just curious, what is the nature of the policy that forbids mentioning The Pub there?  (Obviously, I don't go there... not even sure where there is, actually.  )

Eric Storm

That's the rule, you can't provide a link to another site. I'm pretty sure in a public area like my profile page I've been dinged just for mentioning that someone should go to wolfpub. But in the comments section of the stories, I have gotten away  with spelling out the name without the dots or www

Guess they didn't feel that censoring the stories was enough censorship for them.

Eric Storm

RJules3 wrote:

A heartfelt THANK YOU to you! 

... I am grateful for this. Without your direction The Mystic Wolf Pub had stayed a mystery to me. I never came across it before.

Thank you again and good luck to you!

Have you checked out mydarkside here at Wolfpub? I know her from another site where the rules kept her dark side in. I sent her here and enjoy that side of her a lot.

bistander wrote:

Have you checked out mydarkside here at Wolfpub? ....

Yes, the name 'mydarkside' got me curious while scrolling through the list of authors and I took a look into the short stories. Fairly fast I noticed these kind of stories are not for me. Only elaborated long stories let me take a walk through fantasy land. After reading your question I tried 'Daddy Is He Hurting Her?' but was repelled by violence against the very young - that's not for me.
There is still a lot to discover here but at the moment 'Potential' consumes the most of the time I have to indulge in my fantasies.