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2017-Feb-23 @ 9:06 PM
Bridget
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I'm a very amateur and new writer of porn stories, and I write mostly for my own enjoyment and the enjoyment of others, not for profit or professional publication. I welcome and enjoy comments, so please tell me what you liked, what you enjoyed and also what didn't seem to work or what could be changed and improved in the future. The themes I've worked with up to this point are mostly gang bangs, incest, cuckolding with some bisexual overtones as well. I'm interested in expanding into bestiality and younger with older, while maintaining a likely focus on gang bang, double penetration and group sex scenarios. I hope that what I write will get you off, and keep you hard or wet when re-reading as well.