Marked One

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2017-Nov-8 @ 12:02 AM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 780

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2017-Nov-9 @ 11:21 AM
Crusader
Wasted
Member since 2007-Jul-19
Posts: 155

This looks like it will be awesome. I intrigued.


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2017-Nov-10 @ 2:57 PM
Marked One
Contributor
Member since 2017-Nov-7
Posts: 3

Thank you! I will try my best to deliver a good story.


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2020-Jun-6 @ 11:39 AM
j15
Tipsy
Member since 2015-Dec-19
Posts: 1

Is there any chance this story will continue here?


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Hey there!

I'm a newcomer to writing erotic stories although I've been an avid reader of them. Wanted try myself out so I'll publish my first novel here and see if anyone's interested in it. What I'm looking for in stories is the emotional narrative. Characters that I'm genuinely interested for and want them to succeed. It can be any kind of genre and the plot can be as weird as it can, it doesn't matter. Just the people in them be well written and have a motivation that I can connect to and then I'll be hooked:).

I love mind control/hypnosis in any form and I think it's an interesting plot device, but most of the time it's strangely underused.