Ok, I've changed my mind.  I'm just going to post the rest of book 1 here without waiting to re-edit it.  It's taking too long (my fault, not the editor).  I will repost each chapter as I re-edit it.  That way, I can get book 1 on here and then get going on book 2 and 3 here.  I will likely finish posting book 1 Thanksgiving week.  Just keep in mind that I am eventually cleaning up Book 1.

I'm glad i found this site. I've read the entire first book on another website and can't wait until the rest is posted.. Hopefully you haven't left this site to another because it took a while to find this one..lol

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Ok, I'm finally getting around to posting the resat of My Girls as I promised to do over Thanksgiving weekend.  Just keep in mind that everything beyond chapter 22 has not had the re-editing that is being worked on.  I will repost those chapters as they are done and announce them here.   Just be kind... this was my first story I wrote, so it desperately needs the re-editing, at least in my opinion.  The re-editing will not change the content or the story... I have added a few sentences here and there, but nothing significant.  It just changes sentence structure, wording, spelling, etc. 

Enjoy.  After I finish posting MG's, I will start posting MG 2.  That and MG 3 have already been edited.

I am just starting chapter 9 and i am fully engrossed in the story. The sex is very well written, but the character development is extraordinary. I hope you enjoy your time at the pub and continue to write gotta get back to the story I want to know what happens next.....

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WOW! Awesome book i am about to start the next. Thank you!

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I think that this story is an amazing achievement of erotic literature. I would recommend this story to anyone interested in the genre. Thank you for posting it. I can't wait to read the next book.

1/3 of the way through & I HAD to add this to my favorites, GREAT story so far.

(posted from Chapter 10)

I will tell the author one thing, If you are writing fiction professionally PLEASE let me what name to look for & I will buy whatever you are writing!

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very nice story, well written, and I thought that '24' was an absolutely brilliant name for a privet, high end, paramilitary organization.

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SnakeEater wrote:

I will tell the author one thing, If you are writing fiction professionally PLEASE let me what name to look for & I will buy whatever you are writing!

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I often wonder about that. The quality of of the work posted here... it is hard for me to believe that none of my favorite contributes here, are not aslo published authors.

Just started reading, Normally I just read Eric's stuff but I must say after just a few chapters I got very engrossed in your story quite brilliant work. Im curious if your still around? Very good writing one way or another. I plan on finishing this book and moving on to the others promptly

Yep, still around.  Working on the epilogue of book 3 now.    Glad you like it.  Enjoy the rest of the three books.

Thank you I'll post as I finish each book to give you my thoughts, That is if your interested

always interested in feedback.

I just finished the first book, I came here for a story from Eric, but then I decided to see what the other writers brought to the table. I was floored by this story, I couldn't wait to get through each chapter. I'm getting the second one now to read and can't wait to see what changes come.

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The 2nd book is rough but great. The 3rd ... isn't finished yet. Great stories though.

Anyone know what LOP stands for. It is used twice in the story.

I felt the love of LOP in my mind, wishing she had had that growing up.

This had worked before with LOP; I hoped it would work now or I was going to be forced to slap her to calm her down.

LOP is the acronym for Little Orange Person.

the whole series is great it inspired me to write again

This my fourth or fifth time reading this book of "My Girls" , sixth or seventh for the original "My Girls" . I love the series and would love to see an PG version for general comsumption . I like this better than the following , in that "Patrick" gits pissed about being kept in the dark by the women . I have a great love for the women in my life but I have "Butted Heads" with all of them , from spanking Great neices to arguing with my mother . I like the charactor , however I really can't see him as a leader I would follow . Yes he is powerful but never proactive . He tries to put him self out there in the last book and get a spine but "oh no , don't kill the people trying to kill your Family" , Their just "misunderstood" ! Many said that the NAZI'S where misunderstood , we all know how that worked out , we're still dealing with that shit . I uderstand women being a calming affect on men but being the stick and carrot I'm not so sure . That being said , I think this is a great series , you don't to know what I think about JRRT'S works or the Potter books. Feel free to respond .

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Saw that one coming.
Waiting to see where the training came from.

(posted from Chapter 17)

Very interesting.  You did cost me a number of hours sleep. Could not put it down i the last several chapters.

Looking forward to the next book.

B

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Loving this story.  I started to read it over a year ago, I think, but for some reason, stopped.
The emotional aspects are very well handled.  Some parts make water leak out of my eyes. 
I can't wait for what comes next . . .

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OMG, this is excellent writing. It kept me intrigued for the entire book. I'm not getting any work done around the house beause I could not walk away. Looking forward to book 2.

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Dadrepus wrote:

OMG, this is excellent writing. It kept me intrigued for the entire book. I'm not getting any work done around the house beause I could not walk away. Looking forward to book 2.

On the one hand, I appreciate and want to encourage you to make posts like this.  Authors need this kind of encouragement to keep writing.

On the other hand, I don't want you to be waiting for a reply you're not going to get.

Unknown hasn't been seen since 2012.  So, go ahead, enjoy his stories, but don't expect to get any reply to your feedback.

Eric Storm