Renownwolf
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ah k shame it's done, loved every part of it
and the  is just something I automaticly use, sometimes without me even realizing.
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Eric Storm
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Um... just a friendly tip: You might want to get out of that habit. It changes the tone of your message, for one thing, and for another, I'm sure it offends some people when you didn't mean to. Especially when, like this, you've never posted here before.
Just a thought,
Eric Storm
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Renownwolf
Tipsy
Member since 2010-Nov-7
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I'll remember that, and I sure didn't mean to offend anyone
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Flamewolf
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Member since 2011-Jul-17
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Great story I loved the twist I hated HOW Misty had to Die But I give your story a rating of 10/10
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Eric Storm
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As I told you in email, living here in Florida, the threats posed by hurricanes are all too well-known. These things happen.
Glad you liked the story, though. Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm
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grandad_rufus
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Just gotta love your stories Eric - Thanks.
(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)
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If they give you ruled paper, write the other way.
Grandad Rufus.
It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints...
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Eric Storm
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback.
Eric Storm
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robin42069
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Member since 2012-Nov-25
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it was a good story i liked it.i also liked Henry as a character.you made him seem like a great person to know and thats always nice when reading a story makes it more real to me
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Eric Storm
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Glad you enjoyed it. I don't get much feedback on this one, so it's always nice to hear that someone liked it.
Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm
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adultswim3
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Another great story. I always start reading and say I'll read a chapter per night. Here I am at 5 am and I read the whole thing in one sitting. Your stories always manage to keep me wanting more. Luckily I don't have any plans for tomorrow eh today I guess. 
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Eric Storm
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What? Going to bed at 5am is normal, isn't it?
Eric Storm
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lordalpha
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Member since 2007-Jan-26
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It is for me, but I'm crazy!!
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DreamLvr_ca
Tipsy
Member since 2015-Oct-22
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Thank you well written and good build of character and story line.
(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)
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Eric Storm
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Glad you enjoyed the story. I don't get much response to this one, so I'm always happy to hear someone liked it.
Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm
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Freon22
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After reading DreamLvr_ca post I went and looked up the story. I read and really enjoyed it, when I post about a story I like to tell about what I liked about the story. I can not do that without giving away details and spoiling it for other that may not have read it yet. So I will just say well done Eric you really brought out the characters and storyline so well that I could see it unfold in my mind. Thank you! To everyone else if you have not read this story you should, it is only 8 chapters long but some of the best reading that I have read. :-)
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Eric Storm
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Thanks for the feedback. You can always send emails if you want to praise things without giving away spoilers.
I'm glad you liked the story. Maybe others will discover it, too.
Eric Storm
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Rescue25
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Really nice. Liked the ending.
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Eric Storm
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm
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Lacy69
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Just finished reading and what a great story. Almost can be morphed in to a novel for super heroes. I like how all the girls stepped up to help. Well written and enjoyed it
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Eric Storm
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Glad you enjoyed it.
This story takes place in the "Project GUARDIAN" universe, as do Justice Seven and Paladin, which are more "superhero-like" if that's what you're interested in.
Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm
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ozygonzo
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No Matter What You Write ERIC, I Find It Compelling Reading
Regards Paul
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db1644
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Member since 2017-Oct-2
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I've recently discovered your site and just completed reading this story. I enjoyed it very much. It was well written with good character development. Please write some more. Thanks
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Eric Storm
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Glad you enjoyed the story. I hope you like my other works, as well.
Eric Storm
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daves.not.here
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Another great story! I read this story about a decade ago, so I wanted to read it again. I enjoyed reading it again.
I did notice 1 typo. You put "wondered allowed" instead of "wondered out loud" in chapter 6. :-)
Thanks,
Dave
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Eric Storm
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daves.not.here wrote:...You put "wondered allowed" instead of "wondered out loud"...
Nooooo, I put "wondered allowed" instead of "wondered aloud". My typos aren't THAT bad.
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