Tempest of the Flames Volume 2: "Maelstrom"

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2011-Jan-20 @ 8:46 AM
Bridget
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Tempest of the Flames Volume 2: "Maelstrom"

Tom and Carol have continued their relationship in secret for two years since their week trapped because of the snowstorm... but what will happen when Bob, Carol's husband, is no longer around?


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2011-Jan-20 @ 10:19 AM
Cenobite829
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I absolutly loved this story. Once again you have written real people and made their situtation seem like something that could happen. As always I wait for more of your work.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2011-Jan-20 @ 1:04 PM
Eric Storm
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I'm glad you enjoyed this one.  Kind of "lightweight" for me, but it's a nice little addition to the tale.

Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm


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2012-May-10 @ 12:32 PM
Kitsune
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I was defiantly hoping that you would take the story that way when i started reading this chapter. You made it so easy to like the mother son relationship you created and i would have hated for the story to not end with it. Great job


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2012-Dec-15 @ 9:13 PM
gdaddy27
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was wondering if there will be more?

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2012-Dec-16 @ 12:11 AM
Eric Storm
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I am currently working (very slowly... sad ) on Vol. 3 of this story.

Eric Storm


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