Agent of Change
by Eric Storm
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Agent of Change

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Originally Posted on: 2017-03-15
Last Updated on: 2025-11-20
Genre(s): Science Fiction
Code(s) Used: bd, ds, first, inc, inter, mc, reluc, rom, teen, toys, viol, ws
Pairings Used: 3+, FF, mF, mf
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When Nick Shilling goes to church camp, he only expects a couple weeks of peace and quiet away from his father.

As things turn from church camp to frat party, however, Nick can't figure out what's going on. Especially because it's clear that the adults are just going to go along with it.

Shortly thereafter, Nick learns he's got some new friends from out of town who are responsible for the goings-on at the camp, and they have some things they'd like him to do for them. To help out, they're going to give him a few new abilities to pull it off.

What follows is a mix of the serious, the silly and the surreal. Can Nick prepare the way for things to come, or will he be discovered?

AUTHOR'S NOTE
This story is not intended to be as serious as some of my other works. Many technical details will be omitted, altered, or just outright gotten wrong, for the sake of keeping the story simple, since it isn't really about the technology, or the politics, it's about the people.

This story was in part inspired by two other stories that I happen to like. One finished: They Talked Themselves Into It, and one not: Crystal Control. Both can be found at MCStories. This is not an attempt to retell those stories, it is just the tale that was born in my head after reading them.

STORY CONTENT NOTICE: The "bd" code in this story refers to various forms of restraints used, the use of "bondage furniture", and spanking with hand, paddle, and riding crop. It is not a huge feature of the story. Likewise, the "ws" code refers to a single scene where partners are experimenting to discover their likes and dislikes.

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2025-Sep-15 @ 12:44 PM
sadimlonely
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Again, an interesting concept which I am enjoying.

I know life gets in the way, but just wondering if there is any timetable on the next chapters?

(posted from Chapter 31)


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2025-Sep-15 @ 11:37 PM
reaper1963
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I hope that the next chapter doesn't take this long to come out. I wish that there was a schedule or timeline of some sort for chapters releases.

(posted from Chapter 32)


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2025-Sep-16 @ 5:44 AM
Eric Storm
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*sigh*

So we'll go over this once again.

Do you really think I'm withholding chapters for months, with no releases at all, to make readers wait on content?  Why would I do that? 

You get a new chapter of Agent of Change when I manage to finish writing a new chapter.  If you look back at the writing log, I finished writing this chapter at the beginning of the month.  Then it went through my reviewers.  Once they were done with it, I posted it.  There is no down-time or intentional delay in the system.  Chapters are either "in production" (ie, being written), "in review", or they've been posted.

I'm sorry you find the time between chapter posts annoying.  Trust me, you aren't even half as annoyed about it as I am.  I have so many stories that I know I'm not going to get to tell because I'm never going to manage to get to them, because I have to finish what I'm already working on, and that's taking forever.

You think you've got it bad?  My best donor is waiting for me to continue Where the Brontosaurs Roam.  I haven't touched that story in three or four years.

So... yeah.  If you don't have the patience to hang with me, I'm probably not the writer you want to be reading.  My output is, has always been, and most likely always will be, very sporadic.  Sometimes I get on a streak and I can pump out two, maybe even three, chapters of something or other in a single month.  On the other hand, sometimes I go for six months without putting down a single word.  That's just how it is.  I can't change that any more than you can.  But you bitching about it only depresses me, and depression does make it much harder to write anything, so...  act accordingly.

Eric Storm

PS:  Before someone brings it up, Misfits is a different beast.  I had written a huge amount of that story before releasing any of it, so yes, there are chapters of that just sitting and waiting to be posted, but I am posting one chapter a month.  As soon as you catch up to where I am, Misfits will be just like Agent of Change: chapters will be posted when I get them finished.  As to why I didn't post all of the written chapters at once:  Did you really want to be waiting for me to get more written, without having anything at all to read during those months?


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2025-Sep-16 @ 7:05 AM
Zmaybe
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what a lovely chapter. So many mini stories toyched on and all woven together to make me think I know what is to come, but also make me realize you will yet again surprise me eith your plot twists and turns.  I wish I had even half your imagination.  Thanks for sharing.

(posted from Chapter 32)


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2025-Sep-17 @ 3:49 AM
sadimlonely
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Great to see a new chapter, and a cracking good one at that.

I love the way the Kurtz family is getting its due, and love the interplay with Veena's husband.

I am wondering what Erin at AMCAR has against Nick - and whether it will inevitably end with Nick getting another notch on his bedpost :-)

Anyway, I know wishing won't make it so (especially since you haven't even begun writing chapter 33) - but, y'know .... :-)

(posted from Chapter 32)


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2025-Sep-29 @ 10:20 PM
ptbrainum
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Here's a thought, atheism has been Faith based since 1929 when hubble discovered that the universe had a beginning.  This made the belief that what caused the beginning of the universe a matter of faith.  We know it happened, but it takes faith to believe it either was purposeful, or not as there is no scientific evidence either way.  Available evidence actual leads to a theory of purposeful origin, because current scientific understanding is that all things have a cause.
Happy to be caught up with newest chapter, thanks!

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2025-Sep-30 @ 10:03 PM
Eric Storm
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If we are defining the term "Atheism" as "The belief that there is no God", then Atheism has always been faith-based, as "faith" is merely the belief in something for which there is currently no proof.  You cannot prove a negative, therefore you can never prove "There is no God."

Of course, modern Atheists seem to want to change the definition of Atheism, replacing it with the definition of Agnosticism, which is simply the acceptance that there is no proof either way, and is thus the only truly non-faith-based system.

Not sure how this was relevant to current chapters, but oh well.  smile

Eric Storm


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2025-Oct-22 @ 5:44 PM
hst666
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I disagree with your definition of atheism. For many it is a lack of belief any god or gods.  It is not a belief itself. Most atheists would accept actual evidence of an intelligent force if the evidence was provided. 

To clarify the distinction from agnosticism, an agnostic simply says they don't know and all possibilities are equally likely.  The non-belief atheists provide me evidence and I will consider it. 

I liken it to belief in bigfoot or the Loch Ness Monster. The people who believe need to show me the evidence.  Until then, I will assume there is no god or gods, just like I assume there is no bigfoot or Loch Ness monster.  That's not the same as agnosticism, nor is it an affirmative belief.

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2025-Oct-22 @ 5:45 PM
hst666
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Man I would like to edit that, but I believe my point is clear,

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2025-Oct-24 @ 5:57 AM
Eric Storm
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hst666 wrote:

nor is it an affirmative belief.

Actually, it very much IS an affirmative belief.  You accept something as true, without any proof of its validity.  You said it point blank:

hst666 wrote:

I will assume there is no god or gods

"There is no god."  That is a statement of belief, as you have absolutely no evidence to back it up.

I don't understand why people shy away from this definition so much.  If you truly believe there is no God, then own that, and call yourself what you are: an Atheist.  If you truly accept that you don't know one way or the other, then own that, and call yourself an Agnostic.  It confuses me that people keep trying to redefine Atheist to mean Agnostic.  Well, if that's to be the case, then what do we call people who truly believe there is no God?

Eric Storm


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2025-Oct-28 @ 1:02 AM
hst666
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Again, I do not believe there is no god, it's just that no one has provided adequate evidence there is one. A lack of believe is not a belief. If someone told you there faeries living in the forest, is it a belief to say "that sounds like nonsense; prove it."

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2025-Oct-28 @ 1:03 AM
hst666
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And it absolutely is not "faith" It is a conclusion based on the practice of science.

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2025-Oct-28 @ 1:04 AM
hst666
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And it absolutely is not "faith" It is a conclusion based on the practice of science.

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2025-Oct-28 @ 9:27 AM
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2025-Oct-28 @ 9:37 AM
Elessar
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You... need to look up the definition of faith and conclusion.

Faith is the belief in something,

1 "complete trust or confidence in someone or something".
2 "Strong belief in the doctrines of a religion, based on spiritual conviction rather than proof"

Conclusion is "a judgement or decision reached by reasoning", so your judgement is either there is or isn't a god based on X factors.

While they aren't the exact same, in this context, they refer to the same thing. You have faith in something because of x factors based on x conclusions.

hst666 wrote:

And it absolutely is not "faith" It is a conclusion based on the practice of science.

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2025-Oct-28 @ 11:28 AM
Jefferson
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Agnosticism is rather silly, in my opinion. I used to be an agnostic. Then someone pointed out to me:

- If I was right and there is no God, all is good.
- If I'm wrong  and there is a God, and there is an afterlife and there is Hell and all that, then I'm in trouble.
- If I'm wrong, but I open myself up to the idea, to the possibility, if I allow God/Jesus in, then whether there is a God or not, I'm good.

If you are unsure, what does it hurt to say "Okay, maybe..." and go with that idea. If you're right and there is no God, nothing is lost, nothing is gained. If you however, you're wrong and there is a God.....

And, I guess that's when I started to become a Christian.


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2025-Oct-29 @ 2:00 AM
Eric Storm
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Jefferson:
I want to respond to you, but everything I would say here could be insulting to your personal belief system, so I'm not going to.  What I will tell you is that I was a Protestant Christian for 26 years before I became an Agnostic.  I became an Agnostic because it was the only position I could hold where I wasn't lying to myself and others.  You may consider it silly, but I'd already attempted the "righteous path" and found it... an unsatisfactory option for me, and Agnosticism was what I was left with.

hst666:

hst666 wrote:

I do not believe there is no god,

Then why call yourself an Atheist?  If you simply do not believe in either direction, if you are willing to simply say "I don't know", then you are an Agnostic, not an Atheist.  My 'beef' in this situation is purely linguistic.  There needs to be a term for people who carry the belief that no God or gods exist.  Those people, we should call Atheists, as it is the traditional term for them.  Thus, to differentiate, the group of people who simply do not believe in either direction, we should call Agnostics, as it is the traditional term for them.  For me it is not about what you believe or don't believe, it is simply about what you call yourself, and the clarity of communication.

hst666 wrote:

And it absolutely is not "faith" It is a conclusion based on the practice of science.

This statement is fallacious.  There can be no "conclusion based on the practice of science" regarding the existence of God.  "I don't know" is not a conclusion, and any other option is not based on science.

darthel0101 and Elessar:

Let's not get nasty about this, okay?  Let's keep this in the realm of debate, and not argument.  This conversation is technically a violation of the site rules.  I'm only allowing it because it's (loosely) related to the story.  If it starts to get heated, I will have to shut it down.

Eric Storm


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2025-Oct-29 @ 3:57 AM
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Eric Storm wrote:

darthel0101 and Elessar:

Let's not get nasty about this, okay?  Let's keep this in the realm of debate, and not argument.  This conversation is technically a violation of the site rules.  I'm only allowing it because it's (loosely) related to the story.  If it starts to get heated, I will have to shut it down.

Eric Storm

understood - my comment will be removed


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2025-Oct-30 @ 1:02 AM
Eric Storm
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Removal wasn't necessary.  In fact, I dislike it when people remove their comments, as it makes it impossible for future readers to fully understand what they are able to read.  Just make sure to keep it civil in the future.  You're debating the issue, not the person.

Eric Storm


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2025-Nov-4 @ 1:44 AM
Elessar
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I apologize, I had to look back and see my comment from a different angle to see what you mean Eric, I apologize for it becoming heated.

darthel0101 and Elessar:

Let's not get nasty about this, okay?  Let's keep this in the realm of debate, and not argument.  This conversation is technically a violation of the site rules.  I'm only allowing it because it's (loosely) related to the story.  If it starts to get heated, I will have to shut it down.

Eric Storm


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2025-Nov-21 @ 8:05 PM
JustLucky
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Damn thats a good Chapter!
Nicks really developing as a character :-)

(posted from Chapter 33)


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2025-Nov-21 @ 10:51 PM
Eric Storm
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JustLucky wrote:

Damn thats a good Chapter!
Nicks really developing as a character :-)

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the feedback.

Eric Storm


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2025-Nov-21 @ 11:49 PM
darthel0101
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Thanks for the new chapter in Nick's saga - - - it was extremely enjoyable

(posted from Chapter 33)


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2025-Dec-19 @ 6:16 AM
Crusader
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Ack, I don't know where I was last, and its been a while for me logging in, much less reading anything... and my last post was an argument 5 years ago...

Guess it's time to start over reading.


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2025-Dec-21 @ 5:59 AM
Wicked420
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Another fantastic chapter! Please do not wait so long to post your next one.

(posted from Chapter 27)


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