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2017-Jun-2 @ 8:31 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752 |
Choose for yourself, but all I can say is that, generally speaking, terminology would not change just because the space is large. The hangar deck of an aircraft carrier is nearly as big as the flight deck... yet they still use the same terminology. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jun-2 @ 9:04 AM | |
Crusader Wasted Member since 2007-Jul-19 Posts: 155 |
Given the small amount of distance in the paragraph anyhow, you could go with 15 meters that way, then again this is the ship AI speaking, so you do you, if you leave it as is, I'll get to giggle again when I read it on my second and then third time.
How did I never realized that, I just thought it was the name of Guinan's bar, I do remember thinking it was a weird name, but didn't question it.
The ISS uses forward, aft, port, starboard, deck and overhead, because like you said you need something defined.
Ha I had looked that one up when I realized starport wasn't a thing. Totally cared.
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2017-Jun-11 @ 9:49 PM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Thanks for all the suggestions everyone, I will be hunting down that line and be changing it. Thanks for the positive suggestions. ^_^ ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Jun-25 @ 12:54 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
And a new chapter is up! ^_^ ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Jun-28 @ 12:42 PM | |
Maverick7508 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-4 Posts: 63 |
If I remember correctly, when denoting a distance and direction in ST, didn't they use bearings in degrees?
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2017-Jun-29 @ 8:31 PM | |
Fenixreign Completely Blotto Member since 2014-Aug-2 Posts: 255 |
As I haven't read the story yet, I cannot reference what Wicked said, but I can confirm Maverick that direction was given using a 3 dimensional degree based reference. Example: 327 mark 89. This is the bearing on both the x- and z- axes allowing you plot location (if you have the distance, though they measured that within a star system in km and outside a star system in LY normally) or to traverse 3 dimensional space if instead a speed is dictated. ----- |
2017-Jun-30 @ 4:23 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
It was a two dimensional traversing, i was just trying to give sense of scale using a map in my mind. LOL. You say I am using Enterprise as series cannon, when I am actually using the Combination of TNG/Voyager/DS9 with Reference to Star Trek online. If you are referring to Ceyren being an Orion, well the there is a lack of information on Orion's as a whole in cannon. But as off the current time period, Orions are still part of the Klingon Empire, if they aren't part of the Orion Syndicate. Which even though hails back to the Enterprise timeline, doesn't assume. Though there is defiantly some reference points there. As you aren't aware at this time, the characters will have lots of dealings all over the place. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Jul-1 @ 5:14 AM | |
Maverick7508 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-4 Posts: 63 |
Apologies for any confusion my question may have caused, I meant that the Orion females being more than slaves used for profit, entertainment, reproduction, etc. was and Enterprise canon idea. In the original canon for the Orion, the Orion were a patriarchal society that had altered the females in their species, much like the Kzinti, to be less intelligent. Also, the half of the Orion who did not become the Orion Pirates joined the Federation, though they refused to aid in apprehending the Orion Pirates.
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2017-Jul-6 @ 1:51 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Thank you, Orions have many different contexts because they have always been kind of a secondary character race in the universe. Used as Eye candy. So I did some serious research, and went with what had the most information. Enterprise, though we sadly don't all agree is actually considered canon in the current universe setting. Otherwise known as the Prime timeline. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Jul-6 @ 5:29 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752 |
Don't wish to sidetrack the conversation, but I've seen this particular thing in so many places of late... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jul-7 @ 1:26 PM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
I know Eric, that is a an intentional spelling error. I like to think of it as cannon blowing ideas out of the water, to remember not to step all over the canon. lol. But on a serious note, this story is meant to be it's own universe inside of the Star Trek Universe. So when at all possible it is going to canon, but I can already promise you the valkyrie suits or did I call them Arch Angel suits, lol, going to have to go read back my earlier chapters, for there names, but needless to say, they are about as none star trek Canon as you can get. I am adding to the universe, because I feel sometimes the writers, are hindered by a set of rules, that were meant more as guidelines for the universe, than hard fast rules. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Jul-8 @ 12:03 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752 |
----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jul-8 @ 2:13 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Oh, yes Eric I was aware, so of that response was talking to other people. But yeah I understand completely. I am trying personally to get better at it. But only practice makes perfect. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Aug-14 @ 10:44 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Alright the introduction and chapter 1 have gone through an edit. Hopefully this makes them easier to read and less error prone. There is no doubt some issues still around as this is my first edit without have someone else take a look at it to catch whatever i missed in the 6 hour editing session i just finished. PM if you guys notice anything please. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2018-Jan-3 @ 9:00 AM | |
Lacy69 Inebriated Member since 2016-Jun-21 Posts: 38 |
Great story so far. Looking for more in the future. Like how you brought this about and given a character a most chalanging beginning. Overall good work ----- |
2020-Mar-20 @ 9:37 AM | |
Wolf490 Tipsy Member since 2013-Jan-29 Posts: 2 |
Seems like it's been a while but I'm hoping more is on the way. This is one of my favorite stories I've found here. ----- |
2020-Sep-5 @ 3:14 PM | |
kojak1818 Inebriated Member since 2020-Aug-6 Posts: 17 |
Also. there's a great difference between 'hole' and 'whole'. ----- |
2020-Sep-20 @ 11:01 PM | |
kojak1818 Inebriated Member since 2020-Aug-6 Posts: 17 |
Learn the difference between the words than and then. ----- |
2020-Sep-21 @ 2:55 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752 |
She will, right after you learn the difference between a critique and whining... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Apr-21 @ 2:14 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Eric, thank you as always. Some of the errors that are present in my stories are due to autocorrect on my very old word program I use to write. However, there are quite a few words, that I do use wrong. I am open to correcting them when I am still editing the stories. At some point I will go through and fix them all. I haven't been writing or editing my stuff for well over a year. This is due to a loss in drive to write and feeling overwhelmed with a lot of what has been transpiring in my life. Which includes building my own house from the ground up, so my time is at a premium at this point. It's only now that I am able to get back to any form of writing. So maybe soon ill go through and fix my errors or maybe I wont. But that being said, it's about the story for me. Not how good my spelling is, or whether or not I use the correct than, or then, hole or Whole, or Their there and they're. I am taking classes on improving my English writing skills when I have the time, and am also studying the art of story telling as a while. I have also received a few emails with edits from my readers. Thank you, I am still going to go over those and do my best to post new updates when the time is right. Thank for always supporting me Eric and all the supportive readers here on the pub. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2021-Apr-21 @ 4:19 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752 |
You're an erotica writer. You might want to make sure you're using the correct hole. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Apr-22 @ 8:26 PM | |
thehilz Completely Blotto Member since 2010-Sep-7 Posts: 368 |
Looking for to reading more of your stories when you get them done. ----- |
2022-Feb-18 @ 12:57 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
hey i will be writing again soon. ^_^ ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2022-Feb-18 @ 2:20 AM | |
Lacyann Inebriated Member since 2020-Mar-31 Posts: 18 |
i am glad that you are back and look forward to seeing some updates ----- |
2023-Nov-27 @ 11:56 PM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
life, always throwing us curve balls. It seems. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |