Giving your story A NAME might be a good idea.

Eric Storm

Ah now i find a working link to the story

even a stroy named "unnamed" or "TBD" is better for Handling

sermona wrote:

Ah now i find a working link to the story

even a stroy named "unnamed" or "TBD" is better for Handling

For the record, you can still get to it from pepsiguy's "See My Stuff" page.  Double-click on the blank line that appears at the top of the Serial/Novel list, and it will take you to the page.

But yes, obviously, a title would be much preferable.  When I designed the site, it never once occurred to me that someone might not give their story a title.  In the morning (I'm going to bed in a minute), if pepsiguy hasn't fixed this himself, I will go into the database and rename this as "Untitled Story", as I've already done with this thread.

Eric Storm

Sorry Eric,and everyone else. I was interrupted when uploading the story. Story now has a title.        Now that I have announced the title, I hope everyone can enjoyed it all the more. No sex this chapter but there will be plenty as the story progresses

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And then, to make up for it, you double-posted this message?  :-P

Eric Storm

PS:  Yes, I already deleted the duplicate.

I'm eager to read more. Promising introduction.

Sorry again Eric. I posted the message, then for some unknown reason I hit it again, causing the double post. I would have deleted the extra message but didn't know how. I figured it was an admin job. So, thank you for keeping on top of this old man's screw ups.

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IF you have the ability to delete a post (I don't think you do), it would be in the little menu in the lower right-hand corner of the post, between "Report" and "Edit".

No worries.  People accidentally double-post regularly.  It's not like it's a big deal to delete messages.  I just like picking on people when they make trivial goofs.  :evil:

Eric Storm

I can see California going this way. And sadly most people have a price where they stop thinking.

(posted from Chapter 1)

Unfortunately, I live in CA and have for over 60 years. I've seen the slow caving of the majority to the rights of a few. I'm not saying everyone shouldn't be treated fairly and with dignity irregardless of the political or sexual beliefs. This story maybe a little bit out there, but in CA, anything now days is possible. I hope everyone will enjoy my near future predictions.

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Well pepsiguy1 I hope your predictions do not prove to be so accurate as some of Robert Heinlein's.

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This is fiction. Problem is, what was pure fiction that could never happen in the fifties, is now common place. Never read any of Robert Heinlein's. I'll have to check them out.

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I recommend starship troopers. His predictions about the decay of family values and the emergence of criminal minors was pretty scary in its accuracy considering it was a fictional history course.

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Sorry about the chapter mix up. I removed both chapter 6 posting and re posted a slightly revised chapter 6. I will try hard not to screw things up again.

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I'm enjoying the story thank you for posting

Happy to hear that you're enjoying it. Thank you for you for letting me know. It helps me to keep at it.

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I too am really enjoying your story and would like to urge you to keep writing it.

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It helps to hear that people are enjoying the story, I'm working on the next chapter. Hopefully will post in the next week or so. I've also enjoyed Saving Sister Sue.

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Thank you for another great chapter and for the vote of confidence on my story line too.

Snake_eater1960

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You're more than welcome. Hopefully I'll find time to do more reading. Lately writing is taking up a lot of my time.

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Thank you for another great chapter.  I am really enjoying this story and eagerly await the next chapter.

Snake_eater

(posted from Chapter 11 This is Only Sex Lessons)

Thank you for another great chapter.  This story has really sucked me in and I look forward to the next chapter.

(posted from Chapter 13 Feelings and Emotions)

Please give us a new chapter in this great story.

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Sorry about the the delay in posting. A lot of stuff going on in my life. I've been trying to finish up the next chapter with Julie's new life and am somewhat stuck. I think I'll start on the next chapter of Emily's new teaching job soon, as I have a better idea of how the next chapter will go. Thanks for your patience. I just saw the next chapter of the long awaited, Potential, has been posted. I will start after I've read it.

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Good story. I was so depressed and lonely when I was a high school freshman. A class like this would have transformed my life for the better. I wish it were required today all over the country, though I wouldn’t want to teach it. Author, you have a serious problem with homonym errors, such as your vs. you’re, their vs. there vs. they’re, to vs. too. You also have a lot of possessive case apostrophe errors. The rules are easy to learn, and you can do a search and replace to make sure each one is correct.

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