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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 870 |
Master PC - Cumming in Cymru ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2017-Apr-7 @ 1:36 AM | |
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ChiefRock Wasted Member since 2010-Nov-29 Posts: 224 |
I also like most of the master pc stories. Basically I like yours your writing flows well now if the plot develops, you have a winner ----- My worst day at sea is better than my best day ashore I found a home in the navy-but they land airplanes on my roof |
| 2017-Apr-7 @ 2:41 PM | |
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Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 411 |
It's not a GREAT story, but it's not a bad little read. Quick and easy, a few minor grammatical errors but overall I look forward to where it ends up. Don't personally see a big story from it but I'm not imaginative enough. ----- |
| 2017-Apr-10 @ 2:37 PM | |
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michaelj96 Tipsy Member since 2017-Mar-7 Posts: 5 |
A welcome addition to the Master PC universe. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you. ----- |