Lolita Beach Island
by MDH1969
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Lolita Beach Island

(Serial / Novel - Completed)



Rated XXX
Originally Posted on: 2019-05-08
Last Updated on: 2020-01-01
Genre(s): Action , Drama , Mystery
Code(s) Used: bd, caution, ds, first, inc, mc, nc, pedo, rape, rom, sm, toys, viol, voy, young
Pairings Used: 3+, gF, gM, gg
Total Downloads: 40339
Units in Item: 24
Median Download Count: 1719
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When Brian Jackson, his daughter and her friend are kidnapped and brought to a strange island they find danger awaiting them.

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2019-May-8 @ 5:21 PM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 875

Lolita Beach Island

When Brian Jackson, his daughter and her friend are kidnapped and brought to a strange island they find danger awaiting them. 


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2019-Sep-13 @ 8:21 PM
Cakeman1955
Tipsy
Member since 2019-Sep-12
Posts: 2

Very nice. I'm excited to see where you go with it from here.the little tie in to current events is a nice touched and Garner's immediate interest. More to come I hope! I'll let in

(posted from Part Fifteen)


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2019-Sep-15 @ 2:43 PM
thehilz
Completely Blotto
Member since 2010-Sep-7
Posts: 376

Interesting start to the story. Looking forward to more


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2019-Oct-22 @ 2:21 AM
dcvngtn3
Tipsy
Member since 2019-Mar-29
Posts: 4

I'm not usually into bondage stuff in stories because it's oft times done wrong and relies entirely too much on torture and other things that turn me off, but the way you write about it is just so damn sexy! Not to mention the underlying plot of the story has me yearning for more.

I can not wait to read more chapters and see where this story goes!

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2019-Dec-15 @ 8:26 PM
MDH1969
Contributor
Member since 2019-Jan-9
Posts: 48

Sorry it's been so long since I put anything up on the site.  I've had what could only be called a block with the last part of this story.  I tried to write Part 18 as I had planned it, and it did not work.  No matter how I wrote it, and I tried various different ways, it simply did not work.  The story felt wrong, the events did not fit and nothing made it work for me.  I got so stuck that for a while I've not written anything.  Finally I went back to the drawing board and redid my plot, changing what happened in part 18.  Once I did, I finished the chapter in only a couple of days and now have the next chapter ready for editing, and am halfway through the next chapter.  So hopefully I'm back on course to finish this book and focus on the Sexual Adventures of Tilly. 
Again sorry to anyone who's been waiting for the final chapters of this book, I hope to get them online asap.


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2019-Dec-16 @ 2:39 AM
Eric Storm
Pub Owner
Member since 2006-Sep-13
Posts: 5958

Don't ya just hate it when your characters stubbornly refuse to follow your plans?  I had to do exactly what you're talking about with one of my stories, so I can certainly sympathize.

The lesson for other authors (as I'm sure you've already learned it... smile ):  If you just cannot seem to force yourself to write what you've planned, check your plan.  Maybe that's where the problem is.

Good luck with the writing,
Eric Storm


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2020-Jan-2 @ 3:27 AM
Billybob1969
Tipsy
Member since 2019-Dec-28
Posts: 7

Look forward to hopefully more chapters to this erotica story

(posted from Part Twenty Four)


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2020-Jan-2 @ 6:22 PM
MDH1969
Contributor
Member since 2019-Jan-9
Posts: 48

The first book is done, but I have a sequel already in the planning stage and will, hopefully, be started later this year.  I hope everyone who read Lolita Beach Island has enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it.  Well except for that one chapter that I got stuck on smile


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2020-Jan-7 @ 3:29 AM
howl54u
Tipsy
Member since 2008-May-21
Posts: 1

I like your story but would like something like an epiloge  letting us know if or when either of the two girls end pregnant and a couple of things like that.

(posted from Part Twenty Four)


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2020-Jan-7 @ 3:44 AM
Eric Storm
Pub Owner
Member since 2006-Sep-13
Posts: 5958

He did say he was planning a sequel, so I imagine those questions would get answered in that...

Eric Storm


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2020-Jan-8 @ 8:11 PM
MDH1969
Contributor
Member since 2019-Jan-9
Posts: 48

Sequel is now half planned, I hope to begin writing it once I've finished my Tilly Mckensie book.


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2020-Sep-26 @ 9:44 PM
Todger65
Tipsy
Member since 2017-Mar-17
Posts: 9

Excellent story. Just had to finish it.

(posted from Part Twenty Four)


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