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WarLord Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-18 Posts: 163 |
thanx ----- "A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946 |
| 2007-Nov-5 @ 3:07 PM | |
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advancewar Wasted Member since 2007-Feb-6 Posts: 204 |
hello warlord i read your storie blood and iron back on ewp and thought it was a well writen storie i hope to see more of it and just out of curiosity would you consider drawing a rough map to show the general lay of the land i seemed to...be unable to picture were things wer in relation to other things[i have no concept of distance and direction:( ] gl and mabee he can come accross another hunter or even a traveler from his own dimention i think it would be interesting ----- life=books |
| 2007-Nov-5 @ 3:46 PM | |
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WarLord Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-18 Posts: 163 |
Greetings ----- "A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946 |
| 2007-Nov-25 @ 5:07 PM | |
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amart Tipsy Member since 2007-Nov-25 Posts: 7 |
this is a very nice story, please continue. ----- |
| 2007-Nov-28 @ 2:10 PM | |
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revdeacon Tipsy Member since 2007-Sep-28 Posts: 7 |
"Please, sir, I want some more!!" --From Oliver Twist
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| 2008-Jan-5 @ 9:29 AM | |
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Alq Inebriated Member since 2007-Nov-10 Posts: 19 |
write more blood and iron stories please ----- |
| 2008-Aug-15 @ 8:12 AM | |
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blacksmith14 Tipsy Member since 2007-Oct-14 Posts: 3 |
great story,am patiently awaiting more chapters.- ----- |
| 2008-Dec-27 @ 9:07 AM | |
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ThePirate Tipsy Member since 2008-Nov-24 Posts: 1 |
and some of are still waiting for more...... ----- |
| 2009-Aug-29 @ 2:50 PM | |
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SnakeEater Inebriated Member since 2009-Aug-29 Posts: 16 |
An excellent story, I hope you are able to get back to it someday. Real life & writers block are real problems. ----- |
| 2009-Aug-30 @ 1:29 PM | |
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WarLord Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-18 Posts: 163 |
Thanx for the note and kind words. ----- "A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946 |
| 2009-Oct-4 @ 3:36 PM | |
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SnakeEater Inebriated Member since 2009-Aug-29 Posts: 16 |
Real life has gnawed on my ass more than once. Been there, done that, & ended up with enough t-shirts to provide sails for a schooner. ----- |
| 2009-Oct-29 @ 4:17 PM | |
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advancewar Wasted Member since 2007-Feb-6 Posts: 204 |
/cry want more "throws tantrum" just jk but still eagerly waiting for more ----- life=books |
| 2009-Nov-28 @ 10:41 PM | |
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AvidReader Inebriated Member since 2008-Oct-30 Posts: 10 |
Great story! I hope you decide to finish it! ----- |
| 2010-May-18 @ 5:59 AM | |
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bighorny9 Tipsy Member since 2006-Dec-9 Posts: 2 |
Waiting for this adventure to continue
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| 2010-Jun-13 @ 11:22 PM | |
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bighorny9 Tipsy Member since 2006-Dec-9 Posts: 2 |
Well this is surly one of the most interesting stories I have had the pleasure of reading and wish you would add a chapter are two. Thanks for sharing with us your fans and friends
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| 2010-Dec-21 @ 3:05 AM | |
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coalbuckety Inebriated Member since 2010-Dec-21 Posts: 11 |
I promice not to throw a tantrum. I love your writing. Have been reading about all you published on the pub and before it changed names. I hope all things improve for you, You have a natural talent for this thing. coalbuckety ----- |
| 2011-Jan-27 @ 3:45 PM | |
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StoryJunkie Wasted Member since 2010-Dec-31 Posts: 191 |
I see that it's been a while sine you added to this story, and I hope that you are able to continue it soon. As others have said it is a very interesting and good story. I hope you are well and things are as such that you can continue this soon. ----- |
| 2011-Aug-3 @ 8:16 AM | |
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Flamewolf Inebriated Member since 2011-Jul-17 Posts: 12 |
I can't wait till you add to your lovely story. I like your plot. keep up the great work. ----- |
| 2012-Feb-20 @ 10:34 AM | |
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wpage Tipsy Member since 2012-Feb-16 Posts: 2 |
GRAET STORY ----- |
| 2012-Mar-22 @ 2:02 AM | |
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grandad_rufus Inebriated Member since 2011-May-24 Posts: 30 |
Please Sir? Can I have some more ? ----- If they give you ruled paper, write the other way. Grandad Rufus. It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints... |
| 2012-Apr-25 @ 12:03 AM | |
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daishod Inebriated Member since 2012-Mar-28 Posts: 10 |
very good series so far, can't wait to see where you take it. ----- |
| 2012-Nov-20 @ 10:18 PM | |
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pbakerp Tipsy Member since 2012-Nov-19 Posts: 1 |
Hi Warlord are you planning to continue the this story? ----- |
| 2018-Jan-12 @ 5:41 AM | |
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Dezerae Tipsy Member since 2018-Jan-10 Posts: 6 |
This is a great story. Thank you for writing it. ----- |
| 2018-Aug-20 @ 10:02 AM | |
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johnny rotten Inebriated Member since 2015-Mar-24 Posts: 24 |
Excellent start, can't wait to read the rest! ----- |
| 2018-Aug-21 @ 10:16 PM | |
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gaianwizard Inebriated Member since 2009-Sep-22 Posts: 11 |
I am so glad that you are continuing this story. It's one of my favorites on the Pub. Keep up the good work! ----- |
