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2007-Nov-5 @ 2:57 PM | |
advancewar Wasted Member since 2007-Feb-6 Posts: 204 |
hey was just reading the storry got to chap 24 in one night. so far one of the best stories iv read im begining to think net dosent know any bad writers you sould consider writing another storie like this mabee set in europe or somthing, might be cool. hope to see more of your works and see ya later ----- life=books |
2007-Nov-8 @ 7:04 AM | |
Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
I've TRIED writing other stories like Roadtrip, both sequels as well as stories that are just similar, and have NEVER had much luck at it. I think Roadtrip was a once in a lifetime work and I doubt I'll ever create anything nearly as popular. But I'm very glad you enjoyed the story Advancewar. ----- |
2007-Nov-10 @ 3:23 AM | |
betabry Tipsy Member since 2006-Dec-31 Posts: 2 |
Just wanted to add my agreement with the previous posters. Excellent writing. I really got into the characters, and the descriptions were great. I was a little disappointed with the ending which just felt too abrupt, but then it could be that I just didn't want the story to end. In a way it does kind of mirror real life in that just when you think things are going great ... ----- |
2007-Nov-25 @ 10:38 AM | |
SirVash Tipsy Member since 2007-Jul-1 Posts: 1 |
Me my self have read this story about 2 or 3 times and I just love it. ----- |
2007-Dec-18 @ 3:45 PM | |
The Lurker Tipsy Member since 2006-Dec-8 Posts: 5 |
I have read hundreds, if not thousands, of stories online in the years I've been surfing the net. Mostly they are just a distraction, something to kill time. Summer Roadtrip is one of those gems that grabbed me, sucked me in and wouldn't let go till I finished it.
----- ~ The Lurker ~ |
2008-Jul-16 @ 4:30 AM | |
drestnar Inebriated Member since 2008-Jun-20 Posts: 13 |
entertaing. one question? if the rv was burned how did main character show the photo album off. in the first chapters you said he had that and his mom new? ----- |
2009-Apr-12 @ 9:16 PM | |
ripnullnet Tipsy Member since 2007-Oct-15 Posts: 6 |
The story is no longer accessible? ----- |
2009-Apr-13 @ 3:46 AM | |
Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
Summer Roadtrip, Triplet Troubles, Adam Knight and a few other stories I've written, have been removed, at my request, from this site and others. If or when they will be re-posted, has not been determined. My apologies to those interested in reading them. ----- |
2009-May-31 @ 5:28 AM | |
bdraft Tipsy Member since 2009-May-31 Posts: 1 |
Too bad, I was looking for the story based on a description from Lazeez's blog (SOL's) guy. I tried to find it there and it wasn't there. Google brought me here. ----- |
2009-Nov-4 @ 12:17 AM | |
betabry Tipsy Member since 2006-Dec-31 Posts: 2 |
I'm really glad you decided to re-post these, Thank you! Your stories are great. ----- |
2009-Nov-4 @ 6:21 AM | |
Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed them. ----- |
2009-Nov-5 @ 7:12 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Yay! Theeeeiiirrrr baaaaack! ----- |
2011-Jan-25 @ 4:33 AM | |
LAoW Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-1 Posts: 450 |
As I've already said, this was a fun story! I enjoyed the characters and cringed when they were in dire situations. I also agree it ended too quick. The only negative thing I had was the grammar/spelling, before AND after editing. ----- I don't have to worry about revenge because Karma is a bigger bitch than I will ever have to be. |
2011-Aug-20 @ 2:40 PM | |
Flamewolf Inebriated Member since 2011-Jul-17 Posts: 12 |
With all the details in your story. I fell like I was there with you. You made it very real. Great job!!! You are one of the best writers I have ever read. Keep up the great work. ----- |
2011-Aug-22 @ 1:34 AM | |
Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
Wow!! Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the story. ----- |
2016-Jul-27 @ 1:01 AM | |
Lacy69 Inebriated Member since 2016-Jun-21 Posts: 38 |
Yes its late for comments but i agree with the others that this was a awesome story. From chapter 1 to the end i loved every minute of it. ----- |
2021-Jun-3 @ 2:14 AM | |
Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
I have a question for anyone who reads this post and has actually taken the time and trouble to read my first ever posted novel, "Summer Roadtrip." ----- |
2021-Jun-3 @ 2:25 AM | |
thehilz Completely Blotto Member since 2010-Sep-7 Posts: 368 |
It’s been a long time since I read it and I really can’t recall many details so I would read it(probably will reread it sometime soon regardless now) but if your unhappy with then current version then you should work on it to get it to a point that you are satisfied with it. ----- |
2021-Jun-3 @ 2:42 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752 |
Aw, c'mon, you can't hand me a straight line like that, and not let me respond!!!! :-P ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Jun-3 @ 2:52 AM | |
Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
If it tortures you, even a little, it's worth it!!!
Yes, I think I would finish it and no, since I'm not really writing anything right now, it won't prevent me from finishing anything new. ----- |
2021-Nov-29 @ 12:09 PM | |
CranstonFrump Tipsy Member since 2021-Nov-29 Posts: 1 |
I've read the story probably about ten times in my life. I gave my virgin ex-girlfriend a copy and it was one of the first things that ever really turned her on. So, having now had the opportunity to actually speak to the author, I can honestly say I'd love to read a new version of the story. I'm not quite sure what version I have saved on my computer, as I saved it in March of 2011 which was when I sent it to my ex, but I'd love to read a new and improved version. I think I first read it in 2007 when I was in college because I remember recommending it to a friend on our way to Atlantic City. ----- |
2023-Mar-18 @ 11:29 PM | |
Dadrepus Wasted Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 100 |
Enjoying the story immensely but the Author needs to reread the story and fix all the spelling and grammatical errors. Many times "to" is used when it should be "too". Well instead of will. Things like this makes me sad that you are using spell check instead of actually knowing the correct words. I don't men to be harsh cause it is done constantly with every author on this site. I guess this is why we have book editors in publications.
----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |
2023-Mar-19 @ 11:30 AM | |
Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
I wrote the story 20+ years ago - it was the first story I ever wrote and published - and trust me, the story is a LOT better now than it was then. ----- |
2023-Mar-19 @ 1:42 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752 |
Just a thought, but when you are criticizing someone else's proofreading ability... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2023-Mar-20 @ 11:52 PM | |
Dadrepus Wasted Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 100 |
Fine conclusion to a wonderful story of young love/lust! It just needs a little grammatical/ spelling tune-up to be perfect. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |