its really good so far please continue

(posted from Closeness)

I'm liking it so far its very intriguing:) not enough story with empathy if you ask me keep up the good work

(posted from School)

now i'm very intersted cant wait to read the next one

(posted from Ordeal)

Thank you, Xaiverphoenix89.  I'm happy that you enjoyed the first two chapters of TTGB.  I hope that you will enjoy chapter three as much and that my continued efforts will be as enjoyable.

Look forward to seeing how you continue the plot.  Keep up the good work

(posted from School)

Thank you, Txthumper.  I hope that you will continue to enjoy the story.  By the way, I posted corrections to the first three chapters.  I'm sure there are lots of errors I missed, but I hope that I fixed some of the worst grammar mistakes.

Darn you for keeping me up late reading the newest chapter (4).  /sarcasm

Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.

Hello. NemesisQ 

Sorry to have kept you up, but I'm very happy that you enjoyed the chapter   I hope the wait for the next update will not be so long as this one was.

I also liked this chapter, although I had several distractions that kept me from reading it with anything resembling promptness.  Keep up the good work, don't get discouraged, write more... :-)

INSANELY EFFING GOOD. My typical evil-overlord response would be to threaten you with disembowelment or another hideous punishment if you don't GIVE ME THE REST ALL RIGHT NOW; however, I've found that that isn't a good way to get authors to do anything (except kill the main characters to spite you), so I'll settle for giving you a high five and ominous smile.

Keep up the good work!

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Thank you, Circum.  I'm very pleased that you are enjoying the story so much.  I am working on the new chapter as rapidly as I can, which isn't as fast as I'd like, but one must do one's best and hope it is enough. 

By the way, which character did you want me to kill to spite you? 

Hey Corvis, great job on the story so far, keep up the good work ^_^.

Thank you, Timotheos.  I'm working on the next chapter now, and I hope to have it done before too much longer.  I hope my future efforts will prove as enjoyable.

Sorry didn't do feedback on each chapter. Had to read the whole thing at one sitting. The story pulled me in and kept going. Chapter 1 reminded me of my sophmore year in high school when I put one of the jocks in the hospital with a ruptured spleen, from about 20 gut shots with both fists in less than a minute. I was only 5'1" 140lbs. Please keep it rolling!

(posted from the Item Information Page)

I'm happy that you're enjoying TTGB.  I hope I won't keep you waiting too long on the next chapter.

nice story, and i really don't like it when people tell the writer to work faster, but I must say I was tempted to.  instead I well settle for asking if i should wait expectantly, aka check every day, or just wait normally.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

I am a new fan. This is simply awesome. For what little you've given us it is enough to make us wanna come back for more. Thanks for the joys I got from reading your writings. Looking forward to more.

Great Story, and very interesting ideas

(posted from Mr G)

I like this story so far, and I hope you find the time to continue it.

(posted from Mr G)

Love this story!
i really hope you continue this one, it is too good to be without an end

(posted from Mr G)

I don't know how I missed reading this before. 
Excellent story with enough scope to grow into ongoing series. 
Sad to see it has stopped prematurely.

(posted from Mr G)

Hi all.
I hope the author is still around. Been a long time since updates

(posted from the Item Information Page)

The last I heard, this author - who used to be a close friend of mine - is no longer on the Internet.  (How he survives that way is beyond me.)  I have not actually spoken to him in at least 15 years or more.  I actually met him face-to-face once, but have since completely lost touch.

All this is to say, no, the author is no longer around. 



Eric Storm

Another pretty decent story that doesn't finish. Has anyone found any more of this anywhere else?

(posted from Mr G)

Corvis is no longer on the Internet, and hasn't been for a VERY long time.

Eric Storm