The Chosen One

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2008-Aug-14 @ 9:40 AM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 779

The Chosen One

The Kingdom of the South is at war with the Dark Lord Vaskid.  Things look bleak, but then one who may fulfill prophecy arrives.  Naturally, this makes things worse...


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2008-Oct-13 @ 2:51 AM
Black Rose
Evil Bar Wench
Member since 2006-Nov-27
Posts: 164

Sorry, I finally got around to reading this.  It was really quite enjoyable.  Funny and short and the ending made me laugh.  Good job and I hope you get more writing done soon!

(posted from Chapter 1)


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Black Rose

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2010-Jan-28 @ 2:59 PM
Plenti420
Tipsy
Member since 2010-Jan-27
Posts: 2

moorreeee

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