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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 778 |
[AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2008-Oct-20 @ 12:43 PM | |
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Storymaster69 Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-7 Posts: 329 |
I was one of the beta readers for this story but I did enjoy it and the ending made me smile. Please keep 'em coming I want more more more! ----- Sex isn't the answer. Sex is the question. Yes is the answer. |
| 2008-Oct-20 @ 1:36 PM | |
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NahtanoJ88 Inebriated Member since 2006-Dec-8 Posts: 52 |
Hehe Nice story and I have to agree with Storymaster about the ending I wasn't expecting that at all and was the funniest thing I've seen all day... Well Its 1:33 here but I meant since I've been awake. ----- |
| 2008-Oct-20 @ 1:42 PM | |
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Khellendros Inebriated Member since 2006-Nov-28 Posts: 51 |
This story was quite the mouthful to read. Good job. ----- |
| 2008-Oct-20 @ 2:06 PM | |
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Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
Without a doubt, the best story I've ever read... and no, I'm not biased at all. ----- |
| 2008-Oct-23 @ 4:44 AM | |
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adamrtobias Tipsy Member since 2008-Apr-5 Posts: 2 |
Wonderfully original story. I loved that we were engaged in her mind and emotional environment just as much as in the physicality of what she was doing. Made it all the more interesting and arousing. Two last remarks.... Your ending was great! It changed the vibe of the whole story and had me grinning like a fat kid with cake, and lastly... Write More! Outstanding post! ----- |
| 2008-Oct-31 @ 7:35 AM | |
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unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Real good, Angel. Hope you do more. These guys don't know that wasn't even your best work! ----- |
| 2008-Nov-9 @ 11:38 AM | |
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SteelRage Inebriated Member since 2006-Dec-8 Posts: 18 |
What a twist!! I like! more please? ----- SteelRage ....wow, this is the best I can come up with |
| 2009-Jan-24 @ 3:13 AM | |
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Timotheos Inebriated Member since 2008-Dec-22 Posts: 15 |
Love the twist and I eagerly wait to see more. ^_^
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| 2009-Jun-22 @ 9:41 PM | |
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Dark Dracu Tipsy Member since 2008-Dec-2 Posts: 5 |
This was a splendid read, and had a quite interesting twist. I don't often like first person stories, but yours was more then good enough to captivate my attention. ----- |
| 2009-Jun-23 @ 9:03 AM | |
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WarLord Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-18 Posts: 163 |
That was fun ----- "A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946 |
| 2012-Mar-17 @ 4:15 AM | |
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grandad_rufus Inebriated Member since 2011-May-24 Posts: 30 |
Nice short - made me chuckle ----- If they give you ruled paper, write the other way. Grandad Rufus. It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints... |
