[AngelPrincess] A Mouthful Of Cock

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2008-Oct-20 @ 12:22 PM
Bridget
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Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 556

[AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A

Title says it all.


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2008-Oct-20 @ 12:43 PM
Storymaster69
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Member since 2006-Nov-7
Posts: 329

I was one of the beta readers for this story but I did enjoy it and the ending made me smile.  Please keep 'em coming I want more more more!

(posted from Chapter 1)


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Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.
2008-Oct-20 @ 1:36 PM
NahtanoJ88
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Member since 2006-Dec-8
Posts: 52

Hehe Nice story and I have to agree with Storymaster about the ending I wasn't expecting that at all and was the funniest thing I've seen all day... Well Its 1:33 here but I meant since I've been awake. smile

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2008-Oct-20 @ 1:42 PM
Khellendros
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Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 51

This story was quite the mouthful to read. Good job.


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2008-Oct-20 @ 2:06 PM
Jefferson
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Member since 2006-Dec-3
Posts: 424

Without a doubt, the best story I've ever read... and no, I'm not biased at all.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2008-Oct-23 @ 4:44 AM
adamrtobias
Tipsy
Member since 2008-Apr-5
Posts: 2

Wonderfully original story. I loved that we were engaged in her mind and emotional environment just as much as in the physicality of what she was doing. Made it all the more interesting and arousing. Two last remarks.... Your ending was great! It changed the vibe of the whole story and had me grinning like a fat kid with cake, and lastly... Write More! Outstanding post!

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2008-Oct-31 @ 7:35 AM
unknown1000u2
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Member since 2008-Feb-4
Posts: 76

Real good, Angel.  Hope you do more.  These guys don't know that wasn't even your best work!


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2008-Nov-9 @ 11:38 AM
SteelRage
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Member since 2006-Dec-8
Posts: 18

What a twist!! I like! more please?

(posted from Chapter 1)


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SteelRage

....wow, this is the best I can come up with
2009-Jan-24 @ 3:13 AM
Timotheos
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Member since 2008-Dec-22
Posts: 15

Love the twist and I eagerly wait to see more. ^_^

~Tim

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2009-Jun-22 @ 9:41 PM
Dark Dracu
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Member since 2008-Dec-2
Posts: 5

This was a splendid read, and had a quite interesting twist. I don't often like first person stories, but yours was more then good enough to captivate my attention.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2009-Jun-23 @ 9:03 AM
WarLord
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Posts: 163

That was fun

Thanx for sharing


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2012-Mar-17 @ 4:15 AM
grandad_rufus
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Nice short - made me chuckle

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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If they give you ruled paper, write the other way.
Grandad Rufus.

It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints...