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2008-Dec-14 @ 11:38 PM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 782 |
My Girls II: The End of Cycles, The Beginning of Knowledge ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2008-Dec-18 @ 3:18 AM | |
yazton Tipsy Member since 2008-Nov-5 Posts: 5 |
i am a bit confused since i did read the first installment. You have rearanged things so much that this could be an alternate universe compared to the first on...don't get me wrong i do like this one as well, i just don't think there is much from the first one that needs to be known to read this one...just my two cents as a reader. ----- |
2008-Dec-18 @ 6:37 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
It can seem that way at first. There is a lot of connections, they just don't appear at first. The main value of reading the first one first is that most of the characters don't change. Cindi changes in looks. Sammi is a little different from Sandi, and Julie changes. Megan is an adult instead of a child. The relationships changes somewhat, as Patrick and Victoria are not married, but are still brother and sister and married. Most of those are cosmetic changes. However, you do ahve a valid point... the cycles are over, so things are different. I assume from your post you've just read the first chapter. It might be different for you as it goes on. ----- |
2008-Dec-18 @ 10:00 PM | |
yazton Tipsy Member since 2008-Nov-5 Posts: 5 |
you are correct i have only read the first chapter but will continue to read the rest. My biggest concern was that in the first one Cindi dies and yet here she is in part II...hence my thinking of it as an alternate universe senerio...but like you said i will read more to see where it all goes!! ----- |
2008-Dec-19 @ 1:23 AM | |
yazton Tipsy Member since 2008-Nov-5 Posts: 5 |
and then there was light... of understanding...but why in chapter 4? why not earlier?? I will say that the first 3 chapters did hold intrest. This is turning from a good story to an outstanding one!! Great Job on these!! ----- |
2008-Dec-19 @ 6:57 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Why chapter 4? Why do you think this book covers 58 chapters? I don't know, it's just when the time was right. Heck, I don't write these books, Julie does! Ask her! ----- |
2008-Dec-20 @ 2:45 PM | |
phantasm409 Tipsy Member since 2006-Dec-13 Posts: 7 |
going to be a big fight huh. keep it coming bud.. ----- |
2008-Dec-28 @ 6:03 AM | |
Timotheos Inebriated Member since 2008-Dec-22 Posts: 15 |
Hey, been reading the series a while and wanted to give you my praise. Unfortunately I seem to have misplaced it so hopefully my gratitude will suffice ^_^. ----- |
2008-Dec-30 @ 6:15 AM | |
yazton Tipsy Member since 2008-Nov-5 Posts: 5 |
MORE!!!! MORE!!! ----- |
2008-Dec-30 @ 7:26 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Glad you found the praise. More cunming... er coming. here kitty, kitty, kitty. So, no fair to those who have read this on another site, but... any guesses who Cire is? ----- |
2008-Dec-30 @ 3:57 PM | |
Timotheos Inebriated Member since 2008-Dec-22 Posts: 15 |
i was thinking Patrick from the future, the color and affection for Megan is whats giving me that thought. Though there are differences, Cire's attitude being one, I as a reader can accept that being an inability to let on too many future events. ----- |
2008-Dec-30 @ 5:25 PM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Ah, but then there is book 3, of which I am currently writing chapter 35. ----- |
2009-Jan-1 @ 1:16 AM | |
CPlater1 Tipsy Member since 2007-Sep-30 Posts: 1 |
I'm enjoying this series so much. I keep working out a few different ways that the future chapters could happen, then it's good to see what actually happens. Can't wait for the rest of the chapters in book 2, then book 3! ----- |
2009-Jan-1 @ 8:27 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Maybe I'll just let that cliffhanger hang for a week or two! ----- |
2009-Jan-15 @ 2:44 AM | |
yazton Tipsy Member since 2008-Nov-5 Posts: 5 |
this is an amazing story...can't wait for book 3 ----- |
2009-Sep-2 @ 11:22 PM | |
SnakeEater Inebriated Member since 2009-Aug-29 Posts: 16 |
Thanks for the bit about cats, I HAD to pass it around. So far I am seriously enjoying book II, figure out how to dial the sex bit down a bit, without losing the plot, & it would likely sell well on the mainstream market. An excellent read! ----- |
2009-Sep-3 @ 9:49 AM | |
SnakeEater Inebriated Member since 2009-Aug-29 Posts: 16 |
Another excellent story, hot but too busy to be a stroke story. On to book 3! I would pay to have these in bound book form. I love to read but prefer regular books to cyber stories, they are hard to stick in my pockets & carry around. ----- |
2011-Jul-6 @ 3:06 AM | |
aces8998 Inebriated Member since 2011-Jun-12 Posts: 16 |
great story and as per your question who cire is i belive him to be eric megans brother ----- |
2011-Jul-7 @ 9:41 AM | |
aces8998 Inebriated Member since 2011-Jun-12 Posts: 16 |
great story cant wait to keep reading book 3 ----- |