My Girls III: Truth, Power and Hope

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2009-Nov-21 @ 7:53 PM
unknown1000u2
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Yes I am.  It's just a littlle (lot) slower right now.  I am currently working on Chapter 42 of Book 3.  I hope to post it in the next week or so.


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2009-Nov-21 @ 7:58 PM
jerry30
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thank you verry good story cant wait for more i realy like the story 10 out 10 thanks keep up the good work


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2009-Dec-19 @ 10:14 AM
unknown1000u2
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I have posted chapter 43.  This sets the stage for the last battles. 

I also finished compiling all the parts of the Ancient Prophecy that are revealed throughout book 3.  I will post that in the next day or two, for those that like to try and figurre out what is coming.

Finally, I am working on updating the character list, which I will also post before the next chapter.

unknown1000u2


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2009-Dec-19 @ 8:13 PM
unknown1000u2
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There seems to be some confusion in Chapter 43 as to who is with Patrick as a captive on the Empress' ship.  Some feel I accidentally used Cindi's name instead of Amy's.

The answer lies in the last few lines of Chapter 42.  When asked by the Enpress which daughter she is, 'Amy' (really <b><i>Amma-llia</i></b>) "lies shamelessly" and says she is Cindi.  She does this because she knows the Empress would recognize the name 'Amma-llia' as belonging to the Special One.  That's why the Empress, and Patrick, refer to her as Cindi.  In the scenes from Patrick's point of view where he is a captive, the names Amy, <i><b>Amma-llia</i></b> and Cindi all refer to the same person.  That person is <i><b>Amma-llia</i></b>, who took Amy's place, and who tells the Empress she is Cindi.

I hope this clears up the confusion.

Uk1


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2009-Dec-19 @ 8:15 PM
unknown1000u2
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I am posting a compilation of all the verses of the Ancient Prophecy.  Several readers have requested this.  It will be posted as chapter 44.

Uk1


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2009-Dec-19 @ 11:38 PM
hattahatt
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Unknown, I tried emailing you with some questions about the story, I'm the guy who emailed you a few weeks back.  It automatically replied with a message sent failed. Is your aol account screwing up somehow?


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2009-Dec-20 @ 12:38 AM
Eric Storm
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hattahatt:

Did you do what we told you to do in the chat room?  The test email I just sent would suggest that the problem you experienced was transitory in nature.  You should not bother an author with a problem until you're SURE it's a problem...  And you should do your best to keep such things out of a story chat thread, as this has nothing to do with the story in question.  (Even if your email did, THIS POST does not.)

Eric Storm


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STRESS: The confusion created when the mind overrides the body's desire to choke the living shit out of some asshole who desperately deserves it.
2009-Dec-20 @ 2:26 AM
unknown1000u2
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Hattahatt,

Looks like I didn't get it.  I checked all the way back to 11/21, no message from you.  No one else has said anything, so it must be a freak thing like Eric said.  You can either send it again or ask your questions here in the forum and I'll answer them.  I always answer e-mails.


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2009-Dec-20 @ 11:30 AM
hattahatt
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Alright, sorry about bringing this up then.   My two questions were this.

How many times has the extended family reincarnated anyways, before the cycles even started?

And - Every time anyone reincarnates, do they always have the same twin siblings?

Again, I'm sorry for bringing up the technical difficulties that I was having, I really didn't think it was that inappropriate but oh well, I"m sure I'll live.


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2010-Jan-10 @ 10:12 PM
unknown1000u2
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Chapter 45 is posted.  There will be one more chapter, then an epilogue.


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2010-Jan-24 @ 10:24 PM
hattahatt
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Edit: oops, that was meant to go to a private message for him. For those who saw it, I think I was a little too sugared up when I wrote it anyways.


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2010-Feb-20 @ 4:02 PM
gadget
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I sure hope your fingers are busy typing out the next chapters, cause I can't wait long for the next couple of them to arrive! I really hate cliffhangers! I need to know where this is going.... and stopping as you did, shame on you! lol

(posted from Chapter 46)


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2010-Feb-21 @ 7:51 PM
unknown1000u2
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I should just be beat!  I typed some on it today.  I'll hurry as fast as I can.


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2010-Mar-17 @ 10:07 AM
bikerguy
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Hey, a great read..eagerly waiting for the next...
u always end da story keeping us hanging..
dn't know if you are pure evil or a bloody genius smile...

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2010-Mar-28 @ 8:27 PM
unknown1000u2
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Is there a difference... between pure evil and bloody genius, I mean.  The next chapter should be out in about a week.  My vacation kinda slowed it down.


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2010-Apr-15 @ 11:01 AM
bikerguy
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hey..hope u r well!!
when can we expect further chapters..waiting kills!! smilesmile

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2010-Apr-19 @ 8:54 PM
unknown1000u2
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The next chapter will be posted by Wednesday.  There will be one more after that, then the epilogue.


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2010-Apr-20 @ 5:51 PM
unknown1000u2
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Chapter 47 has been posted.  However, it is above 200 k so it will have to be reviewed by the administrators.  Hopefully, it will be up shortly, depending on how bust Eric is.

Thanks for your patience.  Hope you enjoy it.

Uk1.


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2010-Apr-21 @ 2:51 PM
sverny
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What is up with the chapter numbering?  It is confusing because the zip chapters are all off by 1 and 045.html doesn't even have a chapter heading (prophecy).  Also there is no story chapter 45 so the reader gets confused if he clicks on 048.html and gets chapt 47.  Please look into this.  Thanks.


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2010-Apr-21 @ 3:59 PM
Eric Storm
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Website issues should be placed in the website issue thread, not in a story thread.  Do you really think the author has any way to fix site problems?

Eric Storm

PS: before you say, "Well, you saw it, didn't you?"  I don't read every thread.


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STRESS: The confusion created when the mind overrides the body's desire to choke the living shit out of some asshole who desperately deserves it.
2010-Apr-21 @ 4:28 PM
Eric Storm
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UPDATE:
I have looked into this.  The problem stems from the fact that you are calling those numbers in the navigation bar of the zipped story "chapter numbers".  They are not.  They are UNIT numbers.  Normally they would coincide with chapter numbers, but this story has a Cast of Characters unit at the beginning.  This will, naturally, offset the unit numbers and the chapter numbers. 

As to the missing Chapter 45, you're going to have to take THAT one up with the author, as he has not even labeled any of them Chapter 45.  He has a section labeled "Prophecy", but it comes between Chapters 43 and 44... and the story then jumps from 44 to 46.  I will leave it up to Unknown to explain exactly what's going on with the numbering in the story.

The ZIP file issue, however, cannot be changed.  There is simply no way to keep the navigation interface clean, and differentiate between named units, and numbered ones.

Eric Storm


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STRESS: The confusion created when the mind overrides the body's desire to choke the living shit out of some asshole who desperately deserves it.
2010-May-3 @ 3:58 AM
unknown1000u2
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A chapter number has been added to 'chapter 44'  and the chapter number for 45 has been changed to 45 instead of the erroneous chapter 44.  I hadn't noticed this.  Sorry for the confusion.


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2010-Jun-15 @ 2:43 PM
Steen3
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I've just read books one-through-three in the last two days, I can't wait for the conclusion of this series. A truly amazing read!

S

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2010-Jun-16 @ 9:21 PM
unknown1000u2
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Get some sleep! The next chapter should be out next week.  Glad you enjoyed it.


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2010-Aug-27 @ 11:28 PM
Caliburn
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@unknown1000us: I must say that I have found your first story to be very intriguing. When I was on another website and got to chapter 22, there were no more chapters available and I freaked out. Spent forty minutes trying to find this website and I must say I'm glad I did. Your writing is incredible. It's been a very long time since I found myself immersed in such an excellent story. I know book III isn't finished yet as we're still waiting for the epilogue! Please see my post in general comments about some thoughts I had. I just quickly edited this.

-Caliburn

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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