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Yours.

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2009-Feb-14 @ 1:12 PM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 779

Yours.

Perfection in art.


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2009-Feb-14 @ 1:48 PM
Khellendros
Inebriated
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 51

Beautiful.


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2009-Feb-14 @ 5:52 PM
DarkStage
Inebriated
Member since 2009-Feb-9
Posts: 17

I Like this one!

The sole desire of a true artist is not to create a 'pretty Picture', but to generate an emotion, as you have portrayed here.  The only true masterpiece would have to show unimaginable emotion without boundaries.  The only emotion that fits that category is true love.  True love can can be shown, but never portrayed.  True love is perfection. 

I enjoyed this, and agree.

The title...  hard to tell...  Submission to true perfection? 

DarkStage

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2009-Feb-15 @ 8:20 AM
LAoW
Contributor
Member since 2006-Dec-1
Posts: 450

DarkStage wrote:

I Like this one!

The sole desire of a true artist is not to create a 'pretty Picture', but to generate an emotion, as you have portrayed here.  The only true masterpiece would have to show unimaginable emotion without boundaries.  The only emotion that fits that category is true love.  True love can can be shown, but never portrayed.  True love is perfection. 

I enjoyed this, and agree.

The title...  hard to tell...  Submission to true perfection? 

DarkStage

(posted from Chapter 1)

Thank you very much for your kind words. As for the title, there's a reason for it. Call it what you will. wink


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2009-Feb-15 @ 8:22 AM
LAoW
Contributor
Member since 2006-Dec-1
Posts: 450

Khellendros wrote:

Beautiful.

Thank you, Sir.


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I don't have to worry about revenge because Karma is a bigger bitch than I will ever have to be.