I Think She Wants Me to Take Her (Story Challenge One entry)

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2009-Feb-23 @ 6:46 PM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 778

I Think She Wants Me to Take Her (Story Challenge One entry)

This is an entry for Story Challenge One. 

Billy thinks Lucy wants him to pay a visit to her school.  Bobby offers to help. 


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2009-Feb-24 @ 10:38 AM
Black Rose
Evil Bar Wench
Member since 2006-Nov-27
Posts: 164

Pretty short for you, but I applaud you taking the challenge on!  I especially liked the bit about the porcupines.  That made me happy.


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Black Rose

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2009-Mar-29 @ 10:41 PM
Corvis
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 87

Thank you, Black Rose smile.  I'm happy my super short story amused you.


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2020-Sep-1 @ 11:50 AM
kojak1818
Inebriated
Member since 2020-Aug-6
Posts: 17

Bloody marvelous!

(posted from Chapter 1)


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