| 2009-Jun-13 @ 1:15 AM | |
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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 776 |
[Dark Dracu] Star and Moon: The story of Alexander ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2009-Jun-22 @ 8:25 PM | |
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Dark Dracu Tipsy Member since 2008-Dec-2 Posts: 5 |
Yay! Well I will be posting chapter two some time this week. Hope you guys enjoy! ----- |
| 2009-Jun-29 @ 1:36 AM | |
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dev_null Tipsy Member since 2009-Jun-17 Posts: 5 |
While the subject sonds promising, your language difficulties make it a bit hard to read. Maybe you should try to get a native english speaker to do some editing. Also you should give your text more visual structure like linebreaks and paragraph separators.
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