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2010-Jun-6 @ 12:12 PM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
Please Help? ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2010-Jun-11 @ 8:47 PM | |
toshech Tipsy Member since 2010-Feb-27 Posts: 2 |
very short story, characters such as the dog and cat are not developed. ----- |
2010-Jun-12 @ 12:40 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5752 |
I'm trying to figure out if you're trying to be cute, or trying to be a smartass. Your intent did not come across clearly. This is why they invented emoticons. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2010-Jun-12 @ 4:48 AM | |
LAoW Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-1 Posts: 450 |
I'll run with the smartass route. If you followed me seriously, you'd know of the fully developed characters. Stormy and Bit have developed well, all be it a lot more fat than I'd like, but in any case, there it is. Stormy has a bit more growing to do. ----- I don't have to worry about revenge because Karma is a bigger bitch than I will ever have to be. |