Sexy Succubus Dreams - A Porn Troll Tale

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2010-Oct-6 @ 5:30 PM
Bridget
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Sexy Succubus Dreams - A Porn Troll Tale

This is the second in my sequence of porn troll stories. With the first being such a resounding success, I really couldn't leave it at just one story. It wouldn't be right to do the exact same thing again. This time around, I penned a little something to put into a creepypasta thread. As with the last, read and understand the story codes before you read the story. It starts sexy, and ends messy. This time it's horror.

A little something on the nature of creepypasta threads, for those readers not acquainted with them. If you read a scary story in the light of day, it's not all that frightening. We are, after all, rational adults. Most of us (who aren't on talk shows, anyway) don't believe in monsters and we like to think we're reasonably safe from things that go bump in the night. This is the very reason creepypasta threads are so popular. As with all stories, disbelief is suspended. In this case, we have dozens of people focused on a single thread, with spooky stories being posted paragraph by paragraph. The common focus on short horror stories actually makes for quite a spooky environment. It's common for teenagers and twenty-somethings to admit to being afraid to hit the bathroom in the dark. This is the power of suspended disbelief, and it's every author's friend. It turns a few paragraphs into a true horror story. This is one type of thread where quality writing can be found. Google creepypasta and you'll see there are a lot of examples online. Read a half-dozen in the dead of night, without any company, music or television, and you'll see what I mean about the spooky environment. Multiple scary stories add up in a way that a single, long horror novel does not. It's a different effect, and one conducive to a successful troll.

A few stories in, I posted the following. Again, it was paragraph by paragraph. The air of creepiness turned momentarily sexy, and the F5 key started to get a stronger workout. An erection is never really all that far away on /b/ after all, and most posters have at least one porn thread open while they're waiting for their creepypasta to reload. The feedback wasn't as good on this one, but I still enjoyed writing it. I hope you like it.

-animus aka Namefag, the Porn Troll


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