One Fine Day

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2011-Feb-15 @ 7:41 AM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 782

One Fine Day

When her boyfriend had left for the day, he came in and made himself right at home, taking whatever he pleased.


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2011-Feb-15 @ 5:35 PM
Cenobite829
Inebriated
Member since 2010-Nov-13
Posts: 28

Actually not a bad little story. I did something very close to this to an old girl friend of mine and she just loved it so thia brought back some good memories.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2011-Feb-15 @ 5:37 PM
Cenobite829
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Member since 2010-Nov-13
Posts: 28

Sorry about the double post. Don't know why that happened.


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2011-Feb-16 @ 1:00 AM
Eric Storm
Pub Owner
Member since 2006-Sep-13
Posts: 5758

Glad you liked it.  This was written for LAoW for Valentine's Day.  (Yes, we're weird.  smile  )

I deleted your duplicate post for you.

Thanks for the feedback,
Eric


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2011-Feb-16 @ 10:57 PM
nightsecho
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Member since 2006-Dec-5
Posts: 168

i liked it. very nice


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