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2011-Feb-28 @ 7:17 AM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 769 |
Finding Yourself in High School ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2011-Feb-28 @ 8:25 AM | |
Imagineer Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-27 Posts: 214 |
About Finding Yourself in High School ----- |
2011-Feb-28 @ 10:54 AM | |
Black Rose Evil Bar Wench Member since 2006-Nov-27 Posts: 164 |
I don't want to spoil anything, so all I'm going to say is the ending of the prologue is Mean! You are obligated to provide the next chapter post-haste, dammit. ----- Black Rose "Being a writer is a very peculiar sort of a job: it's always you versus a blank sheet of paper (or a blank screen) and quite often the blank piece of paper wins." – Neil Gaiman |
2011-Feb-28 @ 3:13 PM | |
Cenobite829 Inebriated Member since 2010-Nov-13 Posts: 28 |
I really liked the chapter and can't wait to see what you do with it. ----- Jigsaw: If you're good at anticipating the human mind. It leaves nothing to chance |
2011-Feb-28 @ 9:00 PM | |
Steen3 Inebriated Member since 2010-Jun-8 Posts: 16 |
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2011-Mar-1 @ 11:43 AM | |
WarLord Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-18 Posts: 163 |
I'm enjoying this ----- "A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946 |
2011-Mar-2 @ 9:09 AM | |
Cenobite829 Inebriated Member since 2010-Nov-13 Posts: 28 |
I like it so far. I can't wait to see what happens and if Brandon figures out what he is doing. ----- Jigsaw: If you're good at anticipating the human mind. It leaves nothing to chance |
2011-Mar-24 @ 5:11 AM | |
SilentSadist Contributor Member since 2008-Dec-18 Posts: 162 |
Yay!!! Brandon is my name, and the name is a character with powers! Woot! ----- Who is General Failure, and why is he reading my hard disk? All Your Base Are Belong To Us |
2011-Mar-24 @ 5:27 AM | |
SilentSadist Contributor Member since 2008-Dec-18 Posts: 162 |
This chapter made me smile from ear to ear ----- Who is General Failure, and why is he reading my hard disk? All Your Base Are Belong To Us |
2011-Mar-24 @ 5:41 AM | |
SilentSadist Contributor Member since 2008-Dec-18 Posts: 162 |
I can relate to taco tuesdays (man,this story seems eerily familiar and dejavu-like to me, without the mind control...) ----- Who is General Failure, and why is he reading my hard disk? All Your Base Are Belong To Us |
2011-Apr-4 @ 7:54 PM | |
SnakeEater Inebriated Member since 2009-Aug-29 Posts: 16 |
EXCELLENT Beginning! Jesus Christ but this brings back the bad old memories! I was a whole lot like Brandon back then, the early 70's for me. Bad enough that I understand to at least some extent todays school shootings. I hope Brandon handles it better than I might have with MC abilities. I rode a teeter-totter, depending on exactly what was going on when it popped up. A good day, I'd have come down on the relatively good side. One of the nastier days might have thrust me into the dark side, at least for a time. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where you might go next with this, I'm Definitely adding it to my favorites! ----- |
2011-Apr-4 @ 8:11 PM | |
SnakeEater Inebriated Member since 2009-Aug-29 Posts: 16 |
I am SO glad I had put my drink down before I got to the part of this chapter covering Sheri's drive to Brandon's house & Brandon's mental "conversation" with himself during the ride. Anybody within 20 feet of my window likely heard me giggling & snorting all through my reading of that part. And Believe me, those sounds coming from a man in his 50's are.... at least frightening.
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2011-Apr-20 @ 5:35 PM | |
Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 396 |
Was really good actually. The concept that he didn't realize what it was almost the whole time was good too. Though a little more detail on it would have been better. ----- |
2011-Apr-29 @ 10:54 PM | |
Imagineer Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-27 Posts: 214 |
If I told you all that the long delay between postings was part of my homage to the genre, would you believe me? ----- |
2011-Dec-5 @ 2:26 PM | |
Imagineer Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-27 Posts: 214 |
FINALLY, Brandon gets his taco. And the story gets more story codes, and a proper rating. ----- |
2011-Dec-6 @ 8:17 AM | |
Jefferson Contributor Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 449 |
Why would he mention the girl taking a shower to his mother??? Come on!!!
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2011-Dec-6 @ 9:58 AM | |
Imagineer Contributor Member since 2006-Nov-27 Posts: 214 |
Hair's wet, shower's wet, towel's used; sell the lie by pointing out the obvious truth. ----- |
2011-Dec-7 @ 7:55 AM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 120 |
Great start, The surprise ending of the prolong was quite a twist. Keep up the good work ----- |
2012-Mar-14 @ 5:14 PM | |
grandad_rufus Inebriated Member since 2011-May-24 Posts: 30 |
Keep up the good work ----- If they give you ruled paper, write the other way. Grandad Rufus. It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints... |
2016-Aug-25 @ 4:21 PM | |
coalbuckety Inebriated Member since 2010-Dec-21 Posts: 11 |
Good work. I just hope there is a continuation. This is a great start. ----- |
2016-Aug-26 @ 7:45 AM | |
coalbuckety Inebriated Member since 2010-Dec-21 Posts: 11 |
Good work. keep it coming. ----- |
2017-Jan-20 @ 10:46 AM | |
coalbuckety Inebriated Member since 2010-Dec-21 Posts: 11 |
Great read. I can relate to this guy. My time in Jr high was quit similar unfortunately not having the esp abilities ment having to use the other talents. Keep up the good work. Coalbuckety ----- |