| 2012-Jun-24 @ 10:16 PM | |
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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 778 |
Stronghold ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2012-Jun-27 @ 1:41 PM | |
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Umbra Tipsy Member since 2011-Jul-14 Posts: 4 |
Another great story. Thanks. Can't wait until the next chapter. ----- |
| 2012-Jun-27 @ 11:10 PM | |
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Freon22 Wasted Member since 2011-Aug-17 Posts: 123 |
I just finished reading the 5 Chapters and have to say you are doing a great job. I am loving this story so far, please keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more. :-) ----- “Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power.” ― Abraham Lincoln |
| 2012-Jun-29 @ 6:29 PM | |
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RED_FOX87 Inebriated Member since 2006-Dec-7 Posts: 60 |
very interesting story, and has a lot of potential, especially if you are going to continue it after the fall of civilization. I love post-apocalyptic stories. Hope to see more soon. ----- Sex is good, Sex is fine, Doggystyle Or 69, For having fun Or getting paid, Everyone likes Getting laid. |
| 2012-Jun-29 @ 6:46 PM | |
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RED_FOX87 Inebriated Member since 2006-Dec-7 Posts: 60 |
Oh yeah, also liked the joke about how everyone cheered when he entered the room based on an sitcom that he couldn't remember the name of, (cheers). ----- Sex is good, Sex is fine, Doggystyle Or 69, For having fun Or getting paid, Everyone likes Getting laid. |
| 2012-Jul-12 @ 11:49 AM | |
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iccrmmkr Inebriated Member since 2008-May-3 Posts: 18 |
AWESOME STORY!!!!! Please write more soon! The premise is great and your grammar is also great (kudos to your editor too). ----- |
| 2012-Jul-12 @ 4:40 PM | |
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StoryJunkie Wasted Member since 2010-Dec-31 Posts: 191 |
Good story, interesting start and I'm looking forward to more. ----- |
| 2012-Oct-10 @ 4:12 AM | |
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robert49 Tipsy Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 2 |
i hope u write more of this story ithink it pretty good ----- |
| 2018-Aug-6 @ 10:50 PM | |
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Seumus1 Inebriated Member since 2017-Sep-28 Posts: 18 |
I realize it's been a long time since the last update, but I really like the story so far, and really hope you continue to write the story. If finished as a novel, I'd certainly purchase it. ----- |