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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
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| 2012-Jul-11 @ 12:59 AM | |
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Freon22 Wasted Member since 2011-Aug-17 Posts: 123 |
This first chapter is a good start to what reads why a very good story. :-)
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| 2012-Jul-11 @ 9:05 PM | |
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jralston78 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-10 Posts: 12 |
As with the rest of your story's I really hope you continue them and finish them, unlike some of the author's here. ----- |
| 2012-Jul-16 @ 5:34 PM | |
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Aundae Inebriated Member since 2011-Dec-4 Posts: 15 |
I do not always read sci-fi works, but this one sure seems like it's going to be a good story.
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| 2017-Apr-27 @ 9:03 AM | |
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Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 397 |
I see it has been a long time since you have updated any of your stories, so curious if you are still working on this or if they have been abandoned. Really enjoyed the story up until the newest one, struggling to get my head around the next couple possible chapters that may or may not happen. Look forward to anything you might have. ----- |
