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2015-Oct-13 @ 5:07 AM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 778 |
Book of John, The ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2015-Oct-28 @ 1:14 PM | |
DreamLvr_ca Tipsy Member since 2015-Oct-22 Posts: 4 |
Keep it going Please. I enjoyed the layout and can even see ahead a bit. ----- |
2018-Jul-14 @ 3:20 AM | |
advancewar Wasted Member since 2007-Feb-6 Posts: 204 |
Loved it. Wish there was more ----- life=books |
2020-Aug-31 @ 3:50 PM | |
kojak1818 Inebriated Member since 2020-Aug-6 Posts: 17 |
Regarding John's sexual encounter with Mary.
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2020-Aug-31 @ 6:36 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
To write a critique without reading the critiquing guide is also stupid. Especially if you happen to not know what you're talking about. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2022-Feb-9 @ 9:47 AM | |
Snake_eater1960 Contributor Member since 2022-Feb-8 Posts: 33 |
Over all it is a good story. You could use an editor though to clean things up a bit which would make it even better. ----- |
2023-Mar-27 @ 11:59 PM | |
Dadrepus Inebriated Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 99 |
it is a shame the author did not have the desire to continue this story. It was very entertaining. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |