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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 778 |
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| 2016-Jul-22 @ 7:25 AM | |
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Lacy69 Inebriated Member since 2016-Jun-21 Posts: 38 |
I enjoyed this sequel. The interaction between every was great and you proven that Max is not indestructible and that even he has a line that does not get crossed. Very well written. ----- |
| 2016-Jul-23 @ 10:58 PM | |
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Magusfang Contributor Member since 2014-Jun-1 Posts: 272 |
Yeah, I kind of picked on him ----- |
| 2016-Aug-24 @ 4:48 PM | |
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Magusfang Contributor Member since 2014-Jun-1 Posts: 272 |
Oh someone asked about Bones, sorry for the delayed response. Amy just sort of grows out of him but he is mentioned a gas times. Amy playing with him in the library and being chased by Mia ----- |
| 2017-Mar-28 @ 10:57 PM | |
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Neitherspace Completely Blotto Member since 2006-Dec-3 Posts: 575 |
Man what ever the abbot did must have been BAD for a roman catholic to comit suicide means they fear the fires of hell less than the church ----- "I figure that if you can't write decent dialogue for the devil, maybe you shouldn't be a writer."-Richard Kadrey |
| 2023-Apr-13 @ 1:27 AM | |
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Dadrepus Inebriated Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 99 |
As good as the first book. So well written and conceived. If you want a more complete review check "Boy In The Grass". The only thing that would have made it better would have been fixing the spelling, grammar and punctuation. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |
