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2021-Apr-28 @ 8:16 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
But don't they say, always leave them wanting more? LOL ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Apr-28 @ 8:17 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
Okay, I can accept that as a reason to possibly include a scene... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Apr-29 @ 7:11 AM | |
adultswim3 Inebriated Member since 2012-Sep-16 Posts: 58 |
I really enjoyed this story. The 'tomb raiding' parts were a lot of fun. Reba locking up a couple times was also kind of refreshing instead of the stories where the main character just magically knows how to react to every situation. ----- |
2021-Jun-22 @ 4:32 PM | |
Neptune:lord of the sea Inebriated Member since 2015-May-9 Posts: 13 |
Really glad you decided to move forward with this series Eric. Got to say I have been looking forward to it far a long time and hope it's as good or even better as its prequel. It will be interesting how you introduce Reba's magic instructor. Looking forward to future chapters. ----- Every coin has two sides |
2021-Sep-23 @ 7:14 AM | |
KaosKing Inebriated Member since 2014-Jul-5 Posts: 57 |
I enjoyed this series quite a bit. I will agree that I wasn't entirely certain if Reba kept the powers, but it seemed like it would be logical since Andrew kept them and he wasn't the first to acquire them. ----- |
2021-Oct-16 @ 8:33 PM | |
Zmaybe Inebriated Member since 2021-Jun-27 Posts: 64 |
Why am I so hooked on your writings.... more please ----- |
2021-Oct-17 @ 9:55 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
Subliminal mind control texts interspersed throughout the fiction. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Oct-17 @ 10:06 PM | |
ChiefRock Wasted Member since 2010-Nov-29 Posts: 224 |
These are not the girls you are looking for ----- My worst day at sea is better than my best day ashore I found a home in the navy-but they land airplanes on my roof |
2021-Oct-18 @ 2:48 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
Chief, right now, they're ALL the girls I'm looking for. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Oct-18 @ 5:25 AM | |
ChiefRock Wasted Member since 2010-Nov-29 Posts: 224 |
Heh Heh ----- My worst day at sea is better than my best day ashore I found a home in the navy-but they land airplanes on my roof |
2021-Oct-22 @ 12:42 AM | |
SS54 Inebriated Member since 2019-Aug-3 Posts: 16 |
Eric for those that need to have her find out that her powers are there just add one little paragraph. She is back at work chasing an a..hole and she calls out in her mind come back here you jerk and he stops so fast the falls down. With a big grin she says damn it is still there. it would be redundant but kind of cute. ----- |
2021-Oct-22 @ 6:11 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
It's not a bad idea. It'd need to be more than just a paragraph, but not much. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Oct-23 @ 5:04 AM | |
SS54 Inebriated Member since 2019-Aug-3 Posts: 16 |
Eric One more thing do not forget to add at the end she lived happy every after. Very Big Grin ----- |
2021-Oct-23 @ 8:42 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
But she doesn't. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Oct-25 @ 12:33 AM | |
SS54 Inebriated Member since 2019-Aug-3 Posts: 16 |
Eric;
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2021-Oct-30 @ 1:36 AM | |
thehilz Completely Blotto Member since 2010-Sep-7 Posts: 368 |
Really liked the addition to epilogue. ----- |
2021-Oct-31 @ 8:37 PM | |
Crusader Wasted Member since 2007-Jul-19 Posts: 155 |
I mean I check back in every now and again... ----- |
2021-Nov-5 @ 7:58 AM | |
Zmaybe Inebriated Member since 2021-Jun-27 Posts: 64 |
thanks...nice story ----- |
2021-Nov-5 @ 11:47 PM | |
sinsfire Inebriated Member since 2011-Jun-3 Posts: 30 |
Just finished up the epilogue. I remember you starting this one a while back. Good to see you finished it. ----- |
2021-Nov-6 @ 2:55 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
... You thought I titled it Artifacts I: The Gathering Begins just for kicks? While I admit the subtitle often gets omitted, this story has been known as Artifacts I from the very beginning... hard to have a "I" if there isn't supposed to at least be a "II"... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2021-Nov-8 @ 11:12 AM | |
Josh.Bond Inebriated Member since 2014-Mar-11 Posts: 84 |
I like the improved ending ----- |
2022-Jun-17 @ 7:05 AM | |
daves.not.here Inebriated Member since 2007-Jun-16 Posts: 36 |
It's been a while since I read Artifacts 1, so I re-read it before reading the sequel. I enjoyed both stories. I think you wrote Reba's point of view very well. I can hardly wait to see what happens in #3 and 4.
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2022-Jun-17 @ 11:56 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
Me, too. Got any ideas? ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2023-Feb-3 @ 6:18 AM | |
Dadrepus Inebriated Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 91 |
Another good story. I can see continuations coming, I hope. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |
2023-Feb-3 @ 3:54 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
Wouldn't be much of a gathering if it just kind of ended with no resolution, now would it? ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |