| 2016-Apr-14 @ 4:00 AM | |
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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
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| 2016-Apr-16 @ 1:44 AM | |
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saurav_mystery1989 Inebriated Member since 2013-Aug-28 Posts: 14 |
Awesome plot. But it seems both Chapter 14 and 15 are same, did I miss something ? ----- |
| 2016-Apr-16 @ 6:08 AM | |
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witmoca Tipsy Member since 2014-Dec-6 Posts: 5 |
Chapter 14 is missing, i believe. I seem to remember that 14 should be what i think is a great ending, with chapter 15 serving as a sort of extra ----- |
| 2016-Apr-17 @ 2:48 AM | |
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drmetz13 Tipsy Member since 2016-Apr-14 Posts: 4 |
i liked this story very much, and enjoyed reading it. the last chapter was a little detracting with all the time travel though. ----- |
| 2016-Apr-18 @ 4:23 AM | |
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DragoTime Contributor Member since 2016-Apr-13 Posts: 4 |
Fixed the story. Instead of Chapter 15 twice, Chapter 14 and 15 are there properly. Anyone who was confused, it's fixed now. ----- |
| 2016-Jul-22 @ 7:48 AM | |
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Lacy69 Inebriated Member since 2016-Jun-21 Posts: 38 |
Nice story line. Well written and very inventive on the Genie and the society that wanted to take them all. ----- |
| 2023-Jul-9 @ 12:24 PM | |
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Dadrepus Wasted Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 101 |
Definitely a Fun Story with a good ending.Ready to read the related stories. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |
. But you're missing a few things if you read chapter 15 without 14. Probably uploaded the wrong chapter 
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