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2016-Jun-23 @ 6:37 AM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
An Unforgettable Melody ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2016-Jun-27 @ 9:11 AM | |
darthel0101 Completely Blotto Member since 2013-Aug-19 Posts: 254 |
I have only one complaint: the first chapters had depth to the story but the later felt like an outline. ----- |
2016-Jun-27 @ 4:53 PM | |
auguy86 Contributor Member since 2016-Jun-22 Posts: 13 |
Thanks darthel,
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2017-Jan-16 @ 1:32 AM | |
Rescue25 Wasted Member since 2014-Jul-7 Posts: 122 |
The religious aspect without being preachy is well done. I liked the ending. I did like the character development without being overly sex driven.
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2018-Feb-20 @ 10:37 AM | |
lerris Inebriated Member since 2008-Dec-7 Posts: 42 |
Love your work. Read this while waiting for more of a sorcerer in downtown atlanta. Hate your college roll tide you bastard. ----- Some people are only alive because it is illegal to kill them! |
2018-Mar-3 @ 10:17 AM | |
auguy86 Contributor Member since 2016-Jun-22 Posts: 13 |
Ah, a crimson turd, eh, lerris? I know it must feel great being the national champion. Champion of every state in the country... except Alabama. Hehe.
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2020-Sep-29 @ 5:49 PM | |
kojak1818 Inebriated Member since 2020-Aug-6 Posts: 17 |
An absolutely wonderful fantasy, with the exception of those irritating black diamonds replacing the punctuation and typos. they really ruin the flow and take the enjoyment out of reading. ----- |