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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
David's Key ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2016-Dec-1 @ 1:03 PM | |
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Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 396 |
The submitted preface, was; well different, it was good but very different. Slightly confusing on a few aspects but that's just the way I read it. Overall it's pretty fair of a sorry. ----- |
| 2016-Dec-1 @ 2:18 PM | |
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Sdragon Contributor Member since 2016-Sep-9 Posts: 38 |
I might be able to explain a few things if I knew what it was that you are confused about. ----- |
| 2016-Dec-9 @ 9:53 PM | |
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Sdragon Contributor Member since 2016-Sep-9 Posts: 38 |
Life has been getting in the way lately (dont yall just love it) but i havent given in. im working bit by bit on the first chapter when i have some free time (aka when im not sleeping or working). i would really like to hear some feed back on the section i have submitted, the input of others helps me and drives me, please help me in creating a great story. ----- |