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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
A Means to an End ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2017-Jul-19 @ 9:15 AM | |
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Homeinindy2 Tipsy Member since 2016-Jun-29 Posts: 8 |
Great story. I enjoyed this read from beginning to end. ----- |
| 2021-May-30 @ 12:17 PM | |
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Rearaxle Inebriated Member since 2021-Apr-16 Posts: 10 |
I enjoyed this short story. Just enough adult content to keep it spicy. The story had a sound concept and plot. I would say my only critique would be "some of the story lacked a depth". Some of the exchanges between characters tended to be a little predicable and vanilla. With that said, it was actually a nice read without having to be totally immersed in the story to keep track of all the sub plots. I would have liked to have seen more of the story have been invested with the young girl that was lookin for some fun. I feel you left an awful lot of that story go untold. ----- |