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2017-Nov-1 @ 12:46 AM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
The Contribution ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2017-Nov-6 @ 5:28 AM | |
ljackson318 Tipsy Member since 2017-Sep-27 Posts: 4 |
I quite liked it. I hope you don't change too much. I especially liked Eric's attitude. It seemed flippant yet likable. Keep up the good work. ----- |
2017-Nov-9 @ 10:53 PM | |
Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
I went through it and was horrified I'd already posted it. I clearly needed to do an edit for epic mistakes in it, expansion and better exposition, and ... well. It put me off my usual method of writing which is stream of consciousness. Clearly the fingers had omitted common sense as I blathered through. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |
2017-Nov-17 @ 3:26 AM | |
Tuzzdeny Inebriated Member since 2015-May-17 Posts: 13 |
This is marked "inactive" are we going to see more, or was this a one shot update? ----- |
2017-Nov-17 @ 12:45 PM | |
ljackson318 Tipsy Member since 2017-Sep-27 Posts: 4 |
Reread it. Still a good read. Keep up the good work. Look forward to reading more of this. ----- |
2017-Nov-18 @ 9:43 AM | |
Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
This was my re-write of the first chapter. I wasn't sure I was going to get to it soon because, life. I'm 2k words into chapter two and having to redo some of the outline. I've done first person before but it's been so long I feel like an idiot trying to do it now. Used to be words would just spit themselves onto the page. Maybe I'm getting old. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |