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2019-Jan-14 @ 5:34 AM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
My Daughter's BFF ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2019-Jan-20 @ 12:46 AM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 120 |
You might want to look at your chapters, the site mistranslated you tabs and , " and they all appear as � ----- |
2019-Jan-20 @ 1:27 AM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 120 |
Other than the � and a bit of mild editing for grammar and sentence structure, being needed, a very hot story, and I look forward to future chapters. ----- |
2019-Jan-20 @ 3:20 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
1. As I have said before, issues with formatting like this should NOT be brought to the author. They should be brought to me. If needed, I will bother the author. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2019-Jan-22 @ 4:07 AM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Ok, it looks like I'm having to use plain text as even using web page filtered didn't work. ----- |
2019-Jan-22 @ 2:34 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
Plain text should NOT be necessary. Please send me through email a copy of your original Word file... and a copy of one converted to Web (Filtered). (Yes, I know, it seems like I should already have this, as it's what you uploaded... but what you uploaded has been processed by the site, and I want an untouched version to work from.) ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2019-Jan-29 @ 6:17 PM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Chapter four is up. Not sure if I'm making the main character be too rough with Jade. Especially with the face fucking. The part about him thinking of forcing her into being sick around him. Is that too much? ----- |
2019-Jan-31 @ 11:07 AM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 120 |
Very fucking hot story, only thing that would make it hotter would be if Jade helped him seduce Rachel. ----- |
2019-Feb-1 @ 8:21 PM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 120 |
I re-read the story keeping your question in mind. No I don't think the story is too much, they both want it, and even when he is fucking her hard, he is still thinking about her. Personally, and only because you asked, I do feel that making her puke while fucking her throat is a bit much, especially since there are positions you can use to fuck a girls throat that puts less strain on her and reducing the need to gag. have jade lay on her back with her neck on the edge of the bed, then Michael could fuck her throat like a pussy and not put so much strain on her. ----- |
2019-Feb-2 @ 3:37 AM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Ok, does anyone else who's read this agree with James that Jade should help Michael seduce his daughter or not? ----- |
2019-Feb-2 @ 10:03 PM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 120 |
Nice up date, love the story s far. ----- |
2019-Feb-3 @ 7:56 PM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Chapter six is up. Along with a nice little cliffhanger ending, hope you like. ----- |
2019-Feb-4 @ 5:02 AM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 120 |
Love it... ----- |
2019-Feb-7 @ 7:53 PM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 120 |
Loved the updates please keep them coming. ----- |
2019-Feb-16 @ 6:36 PM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Just put the last two chapters of the story on the site, hope you all enjoy them. ----- |
2020-Jan-28 @ 4:38 PM | |
masterRun Tipsy Member since 2018-Jun-30 Posts: 9 |
Thank you so much for the story... Much appreciated...
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2020-May-16 @ 3:42 AM | |
ralphev Tipsy Member since 2020-Apr-28 Posts: 8 |
nice start ----- |
2020-May-16 @ 9:09 AM | |
ralphev Tipsy Member since 2020-Apr-28 Posts: 8 |
thank god you went back to paragraphs ----- |