CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

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2012-Jul-5 @ 11:00 PM
Wicked Storm
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I am on chapter 3 currently and loving it. It is quite good, and am glad to be reading it. Keep up the awesome work Eric.


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In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.
2012-Jul-6 @ 12:49 AM
Eric Storm
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Partha: No, I don't have time... but you're welcome to do it yourself.  All the information is there in the story if you're paying attention.

Wicked Storm: Glad you're enjoying it.  I hope you continue to do so.

Eric Storm


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2012-Jul-14 @ 9:55 AM
HJP1993
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ah, finally finished reading C:SR. I love the story but it feels rather short to me smile maybe because C:JR was about 16 chapters longer or maybe because Nathan's training seemed like it was rushed through with only a few details. Not to mention that the battles were pretty straight forward. Will there be a third installment (eventually) about what Nathan does later? It would seem logical (to me) that he would end up in a position of power, not by his desire but because he has to power to help and because he only tries to do good the majority of people are going to love him. Plus it was his idea to start with a small nation and expand, Mvita would be a great place to start a second nation. Anyways, just thought I'd post that I liked this story and try to give a bit of constructive criticism.

(posted from Chapter 19)


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2012-Jul-14 @ 10:00 AM
HJP1993
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whoops, just read through the other posts and saw that you would not be writing any more... sad sorry about asking in my earlier post, and I didn't see a way to edit it so that's why I'm double posting. I'm really liking the Woodward Academy series as well. Please please, never stop writing smile Oh, and if you ever decide to try turning one of your stories into a book again I will Definitely buy a copy or two smile

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2012-Aug-1 @ 8:33 AM
Wicked Storm
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Oh MY GODDESS ERIC!!!! You are making me hate the fact that I am a poor sod that can't donate for being able to read the premium content. NOT FARE! I just got the last of the story here and just like with camp when I couldn't find it when I was much much younger, and took a year to find the completion of the story I am now left craving to know the ending. SAD. But you never fail to amaze me with your writing. Mucho enjoyed it thus far, and maybe I can scrape some money together to try to get the last bit of content for this story.


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In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.
2012-Aug-1 @ 10:50 AM
Eric Storm
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Glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for the feedback.  It's almost as good as donations....  Okay, no it's not, but it's the polite thing to say...  LMAO

big_smile

Eric Storm


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2012-Aug-1 @ 11:00 AM
Wicked Storm
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Your sense of humor has always tickled me. I will have to find some way to get the money together just so i can finish this story!


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In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.
2012-Aug-2 @ 12:22 AM
lordalpha
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Try hocking a kidney(doesn't have to be your kidney) It worked for me! tongue


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2012-Aug-2 @ 12:38 AM
Wicked Storm
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Of course that's an idea, I could sell one of my kidneys on the blackmarket. Why didn't I think of that!


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In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.
2012-Aug-16 @ 10:40 AM
lordanubis
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loved this one even more than most of your stories I have read. I got stuck in all day and didn't even work on mine, like i planned. Guess I have to do that in the morning. Look forward to more of you novels

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2012-Aug-16 @ 12:02 PM
Eric Storm
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Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the feedback.

Eric Storm


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2012-Sep-16 @ 9:45 AM
tevans41
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What? wait, that was impolite. Let me try again. What? How is this possible? When can I expect an update? What's going to happen? Seriously loving this story as much if not more than the first one. Please say you're not done.

(posted from Interlude 3)


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2012-Sep-16 @ 2:17 PM
Eric Storm
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*sigh*

As you can plainly see by looking at the drop-down menu, the rest of the book is currently in Pre-Release.  It has been finished for many months.  You will simply have to wait until it goes public.

Or make a donation, so that you can view PRM "now".

Eric Storm


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2012-Oct-10 @ 2:23 PM
adultswim3
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Hey Eric. Just wanted to let you know that I love your two CAMP stories and I can't wait to try some of your other work. I was wondering if you ever though about self-publishing your work for the kindle. I don't know if the underage sex would be an issue but if it isn't I'm sure you would sell quite well.

Thank you for writing and hopefully you never have to stop.


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2012-Oct-11 @ 12:25 AM
Eric Storm
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Yeah, it is an issue, trust me.

Eric Storm


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2015-Oct-26 @ 10:38 PM
Rescue25
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Well written with enough sex to keep it out of the hands of children.  It would be nice to see a continuation of the exploits of the now 4.  Even if it is just the day to day of fixing the village and surrounding places.

B

(posted from Chapter 19)


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2015-Oct-27 @ 8:57 AM
Fenixreign
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At this point Ron's younger son is effectively unstoppable and the only one that could really challenge him one on one has already been defeated.  Not to mention that if Ron himself showed up to even have a conversation, he risks annihilation.  I have to disagree with you Rescue25, Mr. Sorm found a perfect spot to end it for those characters.  Now, maybe some time in the distant future where you reference back to the rebuild times would have a good story waiting in this universe.  Rebuilding society would take decades based on the damage done and the history of our own world.


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2015-Oct-27 @ 9:52 AM
Eric Storm
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The CAMP universe is closed.  There will be no future stories in it, at all.  I am extremely dissatisfied with this universe, and am not about to perpetuate it with more stories.  I am currently focused on the Dugerra and Justice Seven universes.

Eric Storm


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2016-Jun-10 @ 2:19 AM
Imolared
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Great story and series. Thank you.
JIM

(posted from Chapter 19)


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2016-Jul-22 @ 7:08 AM
Lacy69
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Sorry for getting to this late.  Talk about WOW!!!  The difference between night and day.  When reading the first story i kind had the feeling that the Demon was through but was not forgotten.  Nice touch.  Very well written to continue the legacy and a befitting end to a master Peace.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2019-Jun-18 @ 7:51 AM
rcaskeyusa04@yahoo.com
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REALLY ENJOYED IT, WISH IT COULD HAVE BEEN LONGER!!!

(posted from Chapter 19)


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2019-Jun-18 @ 11:15 AM
Eric Storm
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Shhh.  No need to shout...

Also, a bit of a warning:  Using your email address as your username exposes you to people who scrape websites for addresses.  You are exposing yourself to spam. 

Eric Storm


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2019-Jun-20 @ 1:19 PM
Elessar
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Eric Storm wrote:

Shhh.  No need to shout...

Also, a bit of a warning:  Using your email address as your username exposes you to people who scrape websites for addresses.  You are exposing yourself to spam. 

Eric Storm

Aw man, don't give away my secrets!


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2023-Feb-9 @ 8:22 PM
Dadrepus
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Damn nice ending to a 2 part story. Well worth one's time.

(posted from Chapter 19)


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2023-Feb-10 @ 1:09 AM
Eric Storm
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Glad you enjoyed the story.

Eric Storm


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