| 2019-Feb-21 @ 5:38 PM | |
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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
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| 2019-Feb-21 @ 11:33 PM | |
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Maverick7508 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-4 Posts: 63 |
A good start to a story that has a lot of potential. I have my personal issues with some of the main characters views, but compared to the kinds of issues we see pop up in stories on the pub, a difference in personal opinion is trivial. I can't wait to see where your skill and creativity take this story. ----- |
| 2019-Feb-22 @ 3:11 PM | |
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ozygonzo Inebriated Member since 2012-Mar-19 Posts: 16 |
This has the makings of a great novel.
----- 'I Wish I Was A Glow Worm, A Glow Worm Is Never Glum, Cuz' How can you Be Grumpy, When The Sun Shines Out Your Bum |
| 2019-Feb-23 @ 6:09 PM | |
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MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Glad you like it. ----- |
| 2019-Mar-4 @ 5:51 PM | |
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MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
So this is the end of the first book. I have a sequel already plotted and ready to write, I'm planning it to be a trilogy and have an idea for how the series will end. I hope you all enjoyed this first book and are going to look forward to the next book in the series. ----- |
| 2019-Mar-4 @ 7:40 PM | |
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ozygonzo Inebriated Member since 2012-Mar-19 Posts: 16 |
Just as I thought, it was a great story
----- 'I Wish I Was A Glow Worm, A Glow Worm Is Never Glum, Cuz' How can you Be Grumpy, When The Sun Shines Out Your Bum |
| 2019-Mar-6 @ 4:54 AM | |
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MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Thank you. ----- |
| 2019-Apr-4 @ 10:15 AM | |
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DoomCock Contributor Member since 2013-Nov-10 Posts: 22 |
A shame the name would have to be changed for this to be published... But great read this far. Keep it going! ----- |
| 2019-May-15 @ 2:16 AM | |
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MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Not sure it could be published what with the age of the participants and the sex between them. But good to see someone caught the Angel Easter Egg ----- |
| 2020-Jun-30 @ 2:24 PM | |
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shrotycg Tipsy Member since 2011-Feb-24 Posts: 6 |
Just read this again and enjoyed it as much this time as I did the first time. I am eagerly awaiting book two. ----- |
| 2020-Aug-19 @ 6:37 PM | |
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MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
Book two is in the process of writing, but at the moment writing has had to take a back seat to other problems in my life cause by the Covid-19 crisis. Hoping that in a fee weeks I will have things sorted enough to refocus on my writing. ----- |
| 2022-Nov-29 @ 4:27 PM | |
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shrotycg Tipsy Member since 2011-Feb-24 Posts: 6 |
Read this again and enjoyed it as much this time as the first time and eagerly await the sequel. ----- |
