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2019-May-5 @ 1:06 PM
Bridget
God
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 521

Ashes

The family raised him not to use his ability on those without the ability. The world isn't supposed to know the family exists. Or families. When he uses it to defend himself and is seen without knowing who it was, his world turns upside down on him.

She was trapped in a fear she found crippling for leaving the house. Her hopes might be realized if she finds someone who can alleviate the fear.

They grew close during college, then one of them disappeared. When she turns up again, it turns the world upside down for both of them.


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2019-May-6 @ 10:57 PM
Josh.Bond
Inebriated
Member since 2014-Mar-11
Posts: 41

awsome story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

(posted from Introduction. / Chapter One)


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2019-May-9 @ 12:09 PM
Maverick7508
Inebriated
Member since 2012-Feb-4
Posts: 33

Good to see a story come together. I like it when creativity, writing and character building make a decent story. May your muse visit you often.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2019-May-10 @ 3:16 AM
Neitherspace
Completely Blotto
Member since 2006-Dec-3
Posts: 573

I'm enjoying this story i have questions but they can wait till after the story gets further

(posted from Chapter Four)


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"I figure that if you can't write decent dialogue for the devil, maybe you shouldn't be a writer."-Richard Kadrey
2019-May-10 @ 7:21 AM
Blackie
Contributor
Member since 2017-Jul-13
Posts: 69

I do hope you're patient. I'm all of 5k words into chapter five.


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-Himself

"Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland
2019-May-14 @ 9:57 AM
Blackie
Contributor
Member since 2017-Jul-13
Posts: 69

The present delay is due to a combination of work, spending time with my pets, and having qualms about a sticky scene (which is a sex thing) which 1: may be  in the wrong place, 2: is not turning my own crank, 3: could serve better as a tension for a couple of the characters. Oh, and I suspect I am not finding it sensual as intended.

This frustration will end.


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-Himself

"Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland
2019-May-15 @ 3:14 PM
Hawkeye273
Tipsy
Member since 2016-May-3
Posts: 4

Really enjoying the story so far can't wait to find out what is going to happen next


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2019-Jun-25 @ 7:30 AM
Blackie
Contributor
Member since 2017-Jul-13
Posts: 69

Current repost due to blunderous name mixup in text.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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-Himself

"Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland
2019-Jul-8 @ 12:45 PM
dcvngtn3
Tipsy
Member since 2019-Mar-29
Posts: 2

I really enjoyed reading this so far. The building up of a story and introducing the characters worked very well to pull together what seems to be a masterpiece in progress.

I sincerely look forward to reading more!

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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