Experiment 47

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2021-Aug-11 @ 8:52 AM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 592

Experiment 47

Unplanned drug interaction generates mind control


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2021-Aug-14 @ 11:22 PM
Pleidius
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Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 20

I pulled back the second and third chapters of Experiment 47.  While editing before posting I was finding too many plot holes and errors in continuity.  Hopefully, I'll get it all fixed and reposted eventually.

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2021-Aug-23 @ 11:10 AM
Pleidius
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Posts: 20

Getting continuity errors fixed. 

Re-edited chapters up and more to cum


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2021-Aug-31 @ 6:05 AM
ptbrainum
Tipsy
Member since 2019-May-14
Posts: 7

Enjoying this, reminding me a bit of 'the book' and 'hierarchy of needs'

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2021-Aug-31 @ 8:53 PM
Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 20

Thank you for the comment
I've been trying to work with the 'with great power comes great responsibility' idea
and trying to show the protagonist's growth as he deals with the growing complexity of his life

and trying not to write myself into a corner . . .


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