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Experiment 47

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2021-Aug-11 @ 8:52 AM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 778

Experiment 47

Unplanned drug interaction generates mind control


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2021-Aug-14 @ 11:22 PM
Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 55

I pulled back the second and third chapters of Experiment 47.  While editing before posting I was finding too many plot holes and errors in continuity.  Hopefully, I'll get it all fixed and reposted eventually.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . .
2021-Aug-23 @ 11:10 AM
Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 55

Getting continuity errors fixed. 

Re-edited chapters up and more to cum


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If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . .
2021-Aug-31 @ 6:05 AM
ptbrainum
Tipsy
Member since 2019-May-14
Posts: 7

Enjoying this, reminding me a bit of 'the book' and 'hierarchy of needs'

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2021-Aug-31 @ 8:53 PM
Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 55

Thank you for the comment
I've been trying to work with the 'with great power comes great responsibility' idea
and trying to show the protagonist's growth as he deals with the growing complexity of his life

and trying not to write myself into a corner . . .


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If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . .
2021-Nov-6 @ 6:33 AM
Handyrandy
Tipsy
Member since 2021-Oct-30
Posts: 2

Good read

(posted from Chapter One)


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2021-Nov-6 @ 3:49 PM
Handyrandy
Tipsy
Member since 2021-Oct-30
Posts: 2

Absolutely loved this could not put it down

(posted from Chapter Nineteen)


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2021-Nov-12 @ 3:12 AM
Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 55

thank you


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If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . .
2022-Feb-15 @ 5:59 PM
Zmaybe
Inebriated
Member since 2021-Jun-27
Posts: 64

Oh please continue this enticing story.  I love the imagination you put into all your writings.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2022-May-11 @ 9:16 AM
Zmaybe
Inebriated
Member since 2021-Jun-27
Posts: 64

Still awaiting the continuation or finish to this great story.....

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2023-Jul-4 @ 10:28 AM
Dadrepus
Inebriated
Member since 2023-Jan-12
Posts: 99

Hope this story gets completed but it has been a while. One thing though, it is College not Collage. First one an institute of higher learning, the other a form of art. I liked the characters and premise. It just can't end here.

(posted from Chapter Nineteen)


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