Watching Susie

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2021-Sep-11 @ 9:06 AM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 592

Watching Susie

Look!  Up in the sky!

With a sizzle, boom, and flash a young man's life is forever changed


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2021-Sep-11 @ 9:09 AM
Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 20

Something I wrote a few years ago.
Looking forward to your comments


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2021-Sep-13 @ 1:43 AM
sermona
Tipsy
Member since 2019-Feb-18
Posts: 6

l like the mysterious faction. Makes a great suspense.  Can't wait to read more.


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