| 2022-Apr-1 @ 6:03 AM | |
|
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
Tales of the Summoned: Book Two: Seiji ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2022-Apr-4 @ 2:48 PM | |
|
Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 397 |
The story itself was good, few tiny problems with not finishing a word, like ‘he’ when it was supposed to be a ‘her’ situation. Only actual thing I am concerned about… is starting a second book or POV of the world WAY before finishing the original? Unless that was a sort of finish. ----- |
| 2022-Apr-4 @ 6:36 PM | |
|
Pleidius Contributor Member since 2021-Jun-10 Posts: 55 |
I'm far from the best at keyboard entry. Extra letters from my fat fingered typing are easy to spot and correct. ----- If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . . |