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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 780 |
Finding Home ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2022-Apr-17 @ 9:17 AM | |
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Glockman22 Inebriated Member since 2016-Apr-28 Posts: 22 |
The CH 2 that is posted is for a different story. ----- |
| 2022-Apr-17 @ 9:53 AM | |
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Pleidius Contributor Member since 2021-Jun-10 Posts: 55 |
Thanks for the heads up. ----- If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . . |
| 2022-Apr-17 @ 2:01 PM | |
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Glockman22 Inebriated Member since 2016-Apr-28 Posts: 22 |
excellent chapter I look forward to more. ----- |
| 2022-Apr-17 @ 8:04 PM | |
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Pleidius Contributor Member since 2021-Jun-10 Posts: 55 |
thank you ----- If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . . |
| 2022-Jun-20 @ 6:24 PM | |
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DoomCock Contributor Member since 2013-Nov-10 Posts: 22 |
Your writing style is actually reminiscent of Ernest Hemingway; short, direct sentences, terse dialog, all with a quickly moving story. This is well-done so far, for sure. Can't wait for the next one. ----- |
| 2022-Jun-21 @ 1:16 AM | |
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Pleidius Contributor Member since 2021-Jun-10 Posts: 55 |
Thank you. ----- If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . . |