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I would just like to Say hello to you all and am Looking forward to some of the feedback on this peace. It is a work in progress and Chapter 1 will be up shortly. I just have to finish the edit i am doing of it right now. I have 3 written chapters thus far and am in the middle on working on chapter 4. As soon as i finish with chapter 4 I will be editing chapter 2 and uploading it. I want to stay two chapters ahead of releasing the story.

Also though we haven't got there, though the main character Identifies as female she is what is classified as a Futanari or Hermaphrodite. I will eleborate in the story. But wanted to make sure that everyone was clear on this before the story progressed.

Will do Eric Will do. Will through that into the Story description. I am still actually working on the story description details. I did a general blurb but I need to write something a bit more drawing in my opinion.

But grate story

Three things:

1. I love the irony of someone who can't spell, picking on someone else's spelling,
2. This kind of thing is exactly why you cannot rely on some computerized system to do the work for you, and
3. If you're going to rag on someone's writing mechanics, it is best done privately.  Especially when you, yourself, don't have the best of mechanical skills in writing.  It makes you look... well, let's leave it at "bad", though I thought of several other, less polite, words that it makes you look like.

Eric Storm

PS:  The word you wanted was "great", as in awesome, not "grate", as in that thing they put over holes to keep people from falling in them.

Eric Storm wrote:

But grate story

3. If you're going to rag on someone's writing mechanics, it is best done privately.  Especially when you, yourself, don't have the best of mechanical skills in writing.  It makes you look... well, let's leave it at "bad", though I thought of several other, less polite, words that it makes you look like.

Eric Storm

PS:  The word you wanted was "great", as in awesome, not "grate", as in that thing they put over holes to keep people from falling in them.

ok great/grate ( i hate my stupid dyslexia. i did not even know i did it with that word. )

re 3. Oh Sh*t that did not even cross my mind, Sorry. and yes looking back it was stupid and yes i look like a jackass. again Sorry.

re Wicked Storm
i was in no way trying to put you down or dig at you. just trying to help that is all, sorry. if it came over as anything other than that i am sorry, but there was no evil intent or hate behind the words just some one who wished to help is all.

Last edited by celf (2012-06-16 22:50:41)

yep, i do love NaturalReader it's a great little program.
i use it every day, i don't think i have one computer with it not installed on it.
O wait i tell a lie, i still have one PC with textassist v4.0 ( it's a older program, it does the same job. )

good news about chapter 4

I my self am working on chapter 11 of 'Life as a Teenage Human Girl'. or as i like to call it LAATHG ( save's time typeing. ) got 900 odd words done but i hit a mini block. ( or i hope it's a mini block. )

but i am waiting on chapter 2 of 'Darkness Among Us' you got me hooked.

if you find a good voice for the 'Free NR 9' let me know.

but luck be with me, i have 2 laptop's, one has got win XP, the other got win 7.

XP and vista/7 Don't have the same Voice file's ( 'Free NR 9' use's the MS voice file's that Comes with windows. )

this let me hear the text useing two voice's, as they don't have the same code, i find some word's that i missed with the other one. 

if that Tip about windows Voice file's helps, well i am happy i could help. ( i have not found a way to Copy the XP or Vista/7 Voice file's to the other system. )

Just so people don't go looking for it:  There is no private messaging system on this forum, but you can use a form to email Wicked Storm directly.  Just click the "Email" link on one of her posts.

Eric Storm

Wow, so I had a friend of mine who is really good at editing and proof reading. She has read and proofed Prologue. She made quite a lot of punctuation edits, and some grammar fixes. Which means I have uploaded the chapter again. But this will be the last time. Now to focus on chapter 1, the hope is that when I have edited it and she proof's it for me it should h ave only one more update to it. I will do the same with chapter two and three! So yay! I hope that all of you enjoy!

Well Partha8993 the influence is different from dimension to dimension. This planet has more then just Digi-Mon idea to it. But you are right that it has an influence to it. However as I said in the opening statement in the prologue its all using concept and not actual cannon. I am hoping to change things enough to make them my own and also pay homage to the idea. I mean how many author's are inspired by an idea they have heard or seen some where else and put there own spin on it. No offence is taken at all. I like when people see the ideas i am trying to put in there. Thanks for the comment, the chapter 1 edit will be up soon 3 pages left to the edit actually. Then it will read much smoother.

Alright everyone so my editor is having personal life issues. So I have decided that though I want the story to be the best that I will be posting it in its second stage of proof reading before it has been edited. This means things might change chapters might get shorter later and so on and so forth. However I want you all to have a chance to read the story. So later today once I have finished the second stage of proof reading chapter 3 it will be up. It has been finished being written so that is a good start.

@freon22 I am almost finished with chapter 4's edit I am trying to shorten the chapters a bit. And once I can get an editor to be consistent with me then I will be turning them out even better not faster but a better product. I clipped chapter 4 so it should be a faster read and for me a faster edit. I only have 725 words left to re-write, then I will go through the secondary proof reading process. Thank so much for the love. ^_^ keep reading.

Love this story. I love the concept of the hybrids, especially Indigo she seems like an awesome character. I can't wait to read more of this fantastic story.

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