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#451 2022-08-28 01:09:53

Eric Storm
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Re: Potential

Exnavyjim wrote:

Hello i started reading potential on a different site and then switched to this one, inorder to finish the story. so now im wondering if you are going to finish writing it.  It would really suck to just leave it and us the readers hanging with out an ending

...seems like you could have just read the post right above yours, which is only a month old, where he says quite clearly he intends to get back to writing the story...

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#452 2022-09-14 16:25:44

Slingshot17
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Re: Potential

Awesome story.    Please keep going

(posted from Chapter 38: How)

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#453 2022-09-16 13:43:08

bistander
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Re: Potential

Chapter 39 has been posted. Thank you for your patience and continued support. What support you ask? Leave comments and supporting Wolfpub when and if you can.

If you happen to notice(can't imagine how you could miss it) �"  in the text don't panic or bother telling Eric. I already told him. What that should be is a long dash followed by a closing quote. Dialog being interrupted.

It was a difficult chapter to write, especially the scene with Sally, Candy and (spoiler alert) Bobby. That's why I took my time. I hope it was worth the wait.

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#454 2022-09-16 18:28:00

dvahor
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Re: Potential

Another great chapter can’t wait to see whats next.  Thanks for sticking with it and hope the next chapters flow easier for you.

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#455 2022-09-17 13:40:59

2speed
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Re: Potential

Great read been looking forward to seeing what you were going to bring next. This chapter brings more than I expected and more twist to the tale. Loved how you brought up two of my favorite porn channels. Thank you look forward to seeing what what’s next!!!

(posted from Chapter 39: Yesterday)

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#456 2022-09-21 07:33:33

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Re: Potential

hst666 wrote:

I am only up to chapter 11, but this is one of the best written erotic novels I have ever read. ...

There are tales (unfortunately only very few) which become something like a companion to me. When possible I return to read them again and 'Potential' is one of them. It is fun to immerse oneself in the plot again. Hopefully it won't vanish like some other stories!
A lot of people are always waiting for a continuation. I don't. Potential I can read to a point and fantasize about different outcomes of a scene. There is an abundance of substance in this story already. That doesn't mean I don't like it, if BiStander will continue to write new chapters but what is there already captivated me.

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#457 2022-09-21 15:18:20

bistander
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Re: Potential

RJules3 wrote:

There are tales (unfortunately only very few) which become something like a companion to me. When possible I return to read them again and 'Potential' is one of them. It is fun to immerse oneself in the plot again. Hopefully it won't vanish like some other stories!
A lot of people are always waiting for a continuation. I don't. Potential I can read to a point and fantasize about different outcomes of a scene. There is an abundance of substance in this story already. That doesn't mean I don't like it, if BiStander will continue to write new chapters but what is there already captivated me.

Awsome comment. Thank you for taking the time to say what you think. What you described is what I look for in a book, so it's great that I was able to provide that for you. I surprise myself every now and again.

I guess there are some who would like to see this story go on for a while, but there will most likely only be two more chapters. By then the story will have run it's course and there will be things in the readers mind to figure out for themselves. That's not to say that I wouldn't enjoy writing chapters and chapters of this one hooking up with that one, Brutus having a go at a few people, and a full-blown orgy, but then that would be like so many erotic stories you could read.

Thanks everyone fore reading my shit.

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#458 2022-10-07 18:50:56

bistander
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Re: Potential

Reposted chapter 39 to fix the funny format thing that happens when I used a long dash followed by a quote "
Now you should see -" instead. That's the regular dash that is on the keyboard. The long dash isn't.

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#459 2022-10-08 19:16:34

pepsiguy1
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Re: Potential

Oh shoot, I thought it was a new chapter. I started reading and found it was the same one. At any rate I can't wait for the next part. When I see a new post of Potential I pretty much drop everything and start reading. Thanks again for your posting a great story.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#460 2022-10-17 15:11:41

jnc6
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Re: Potential

I am new here and Potential is the first I have read. Started on another site and moved here after chapter 6. I have been obsessed for the last two weeks reading your story! I can’t wait to see John get his!! Please continue and THANK YOU!!!

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#461 2022-10-19 00:53:33

peace2300
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Re: Potential

It took me a long time to start reading this story because of the opening description, but I find that I can't wait until the next chapter to find out what comes next. Keep up the great work!

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#462 2022-10-19 08:49:50

Eric Storm
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Re: Potential

peace2300 wrote:

It took me a long time to start reading this story because of the opening description, but I find that I can't wait until the next chapter to find out what comes next. Keep up the great work!

Perhaps if you tell the author what you felt off-putting about the opening description, he might be able to improve it so that other readers in the future are more interested in the story...

Eric Storm


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#463 2022-10-26 10:51:04

Oldfart
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Re: Potential

Absolutely love this story.  Has me coming back time and time again.  Have finished Chapter 39 and would love to see John get his just desserts.  Would be fantastic if there was another couple of chapters but understand it if there isn't.  Thanks again

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#464 2022-10-29 16:37:39

bistander
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Re: Potential

Oldfart wrote:

Absolutely love this story.  Has me coming back time and time again.  Have finished Chapter 39 and would love to see John get his just desserts.  Would be fantastic if there was another couple of chapters but understand it if there isn't.  Thanks again

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Thank you for taking the time to drop a comment. That means a lot to me.

Just desserts? As in, Let them eat cake?

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#465 2022-10-30 00:36:33

Eric Storm
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Re: Potential

bistander wrote:

Just desserts? As in, Let them eat cake?

Just in case you're not being facetious and actually aren't familiar with this expression:

"Just desserts" basically means getting what you deserve, based on your behavior.  This is used almost universally in a bad way.  A greedy businessman who exploited and cheated his way to a fortune could be seen as getting his just desserts if he wound up destitute from a bad business deal.  A murderer would be seen as getting his just desserts if he was executed in prison.  (To be clear, irony is not required for it to be "just desserts")

In general, this phrase is not used for good people.  If you work hard all your life, taking care of your family and being a good person, and suddenly you win the lottery, this is not referred to as "getting your just desserts", even though it is receiving what you deserve, based on your behavior.  (This would more likely be referred to as something like "your ship came in".)

If you already knew this, my apologies.  Your post made it unclear whether you understood what was said, so I figured I'd clarify.

Eric Storm

PS:  In case the exact wording is confusing, the word "just" in this case is related to "justice", rather than "only".  It's not saying "only desserts", it's saying, "The desserts that would serve justice".  Why desserts?  Erm... who the hell knows?


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#466 2022-10-30 01:00:53

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Thank Eric. I did know, but I hadn't considered the word just relating to justice.

What I was saying related to something the queen didn't actually say, but most people think she did. Let them eat cake, and she got her head cut off. I know her name but didn't want to look it up to make sure I spelled it correctly.

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#467 2022-10-30 01:55:08

Eric Storm
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Re: Potential

Didn't she actually say, "Let them eat grass." ?

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#468 2022-10-30 02:15:24

bistander
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Re: Potential

Eric Storm wrote:

Didn't she actually say, "Let them eat grass." ?

Eric Storm

I'm not sure.

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#469 2022-11-21 18:44:13

Degener8
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Re: Potential

Hi bistander. Hope this finds you in good health. I started reading Potential on another site and on your recommendation followed the story here. I love following the exploits of Evan and his "harem" of beautiful sexy women. You have literally given this story so much potential it could go in many directions with more involvement of different characters but like many others I am waiting to see what happens when John comes through that kitchen door with Candy standing there with Evans cum running down her thighs and the smell of sex in the air. Will the Sally and Cindy plot succeed against John? Like I said, so many possibilities. Hope you get the chance to publish soon. Take care.

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#470 Yesterday 14:45:09

bistander
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Re: Potential

Degener8, thank you for commenting on my story. It's always great to hear from someone reading. I'm working on the next chapter as often as possible. I thought it would take us through to the end, with only an epilogue left to write. But, after 2 months of work, it's looking like the chapter would have to be very large to accomplish that. What that means is chapter 40 will come out in the near future, and I'll start working on the next chapter.

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