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I loved it! Is there more????

In order to appease your fans, I hereby confiscate your life from you.  Now get to writing!

  LOL

Eric Storm

Thanks for following me over her, Wiccam. I'm pretty sure while you're waiting for Eric to tie me to a chair in front of my desk you can find some good stories to read on the Pub.

Everyone, I am trying hard to get back to finishing up this story. It has been hot as fuck and I've been busier the last two months than the previous ten years. By the time I get finished out in the heat, all I can do is lay on my back under the ceiling fan. I know it'll be longer than I wanted it to be, and you too, I'm sure, but I'll get it done.

Thank you.

What a fantastic turn of events Gloria and Rebecca, and sweet Gloria getting to go to bed with her sister and her girlfriend.
I just can't stop reading this I'm not doing anything else, it's ruling my life..thankyou..

(posted from Chapter 24: A Trifecta)

This is the third day in a row that i'v read from ten in the morning till midnight ,only stopping for food. i'm going to be lost when the story is over.
it will be like the end of a love affair where i'v been dumped...
I can't believe at 65 its effected me so strongly ,taken me back to my youth, but without the insect (sadly lol )
thanks for such a lifelike tale.

(posted from Chapter 25: Theres Something About Her)

the story is getting harder and harder to read, the suspense and anger is killing me. I really think you should be righting novels..
awesome work.

(posted from Potential Chapter 31: Mirror Mirror)

i can't wait to read the rest of the chapters, I hope they're long ones, I hope you wrap it up as well as you've written the whole story, absolutely fantastic. I can't believe I found this on a sex story site.
Please write something else in a similar vein .

(posted from Chapter 39: Yesterday)

Harddreams wrote:

im ,gussying this is goodby ,a Sopranos ending . need more but i guess its the best way to Finnish .
ill need to have the happy ending in my head. thank you for a wonderful experience ..

(posted from Chapter 41: If We Help Each Other)

I'd just like to point out that the story is still marked as "In Progress", so unless the author simply forgot to change the status, he's not done writing it yet.

Eric Storm

Dear BiStander,
I hope you are well and finding shade this summer. If you live in the same place this story takes place… well I don’t have to tell you, you’re fucked.

I am not a critic or a professor of literature, just a simple enjoyer of stories that make me reflect, consider other peoples experiences as they help me grow and stories that bring me to a state of emotional exhaustion.  (The sexual arousal is a definite bonus)

As much as I hate the feeling, it helps me make realizations about my life, the choices I’ve made and appreciate what I have. 

I just finished CH 41.  I started Potential 4 or 5 days ago (I think, I’ve lost track of days at this point).  I found this story out of the blue. I guess the universe thought I needed to read it, and I’m grateful I found it and was able to binge up to its current state. I was definitely not expecting to find something like this when I started looking, it makes me wonder how many other gems there are out there like this.

I can’t imagine how much effort you have put into this adventure. From what I can tell from the forums you have been working on it since 2016, which is astonishing, especially with all the story arks you’re running with the different characters.  You must keep excellent notes.

I have only written one story in my life that could compare to the depth of this story, 16 pages, about a day and half of work and it left me emotionally drained.  I poured a lot of my soul into that piece and I can tell you do the same. I can see why it has taken so long to create your epic.  The joy, heartache, pain and anger.  I can feel it, and understand how mentally demanding it is to write. Thank you.

Anyway I just wanted you to know that what you have created has touched me deeply, made me cry more than any other story I think I have ever read, laugh a bit, brought me to more orgasms than I could keep track of, and I have now expanded my search to gymnasts (thanks for that). 

I wish you luck in staying cool, hope you are surrounded with people you love that treat you the way you deserve and hope someday soon you find the energy to complete your tale.  I know I count myself amongst the many that await the end of John.  Fuck you John.  Yeah, Fuck you John.

Deepest Regards,
TravelerTodd.  =-)

Oh and thank you Eric for letting me in. =-)

To Travelertodd

It's comments like yours that have kept me going despite the many things that have thwarted my efforts every step of the way. They also make me feel bad that it has taken so long to write this story. A lot stands in my way but I can't help feeling that sometimes I'm being lazy.
There are only two chapters left to write, and one of them is more than halfway finished. I'll get back to work soon, but right now my shoulder is killing me. It has been for days, and sitting at a keyboard makes me so uncomfortable I can't think. Oh, and I also just found out termites are eating my bedroom from the ground up. They reached the hardwood floor. Maybe you could read My Nieghor's Incest in the meantime?

Hang in there everybody, and thanks Smutlover for the comment and for finding your way here. I know most people don't read the comments but I'm glad you did.

Travelertodd wrote:

Dear BiStander,

Thankfully it isn’t as emotionally intense as Potential.  It’s been 4 days since I finish Chap 41 and my emotional state has finally started to trend towards normal
TT.

You better stop reading! It gets very emotional. Maybe worse than potential.

Glad I tracked this down again Bi-stander found it first on xnxx and then wrist went looking to see if there was updates a while ago only to find the site had vanished. Looking forward to finaly finding out the ending. Once you get the chance to sit down when lifes not in your way.

Thanks again for sharing your work with us

Just to help inform others, could we put a full name to this "relocated" website?

Eric Storm