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#201 2022-05-01 15:04:44

Zmaybe
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Re: Agent of Change

DAMN! when you write, you write.  You touched on so many areas and opened up more to explore. My mind is already trying to see which direction all the twists and plot lines will go.  Worth the wait I guess...  but I want more...lol

Thank you.

(posted from Chapter 15)

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#202 2022-05-01 16:52:59

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Re: Agent of Change

Great chapter. As Zmaybe said there was a lot of things happening in the chapter. Going to have to reread it right away to make sure I didn’t miss/gloss over anything. Tala must be really happy as it’s seemed as there was more of her influence than there has been recently. Bridget parts were done well too and looking forward more of the story next month.

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#203 2022-05-01 19:46:51

Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change

chevyzr2:

Glad you're enjoying the story.  BTW, in regards to your previous comment about being married too long to know any single ladies:  You know, I did say "relative"... did you disassociate from your family when you got married? 

3dtongue  3dlol

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#204 2022-05-01 19:57:16

Glockman22
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Re: Agent of Change

Another five-star Chapter looking forward to chapter 16.

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#205 2022-06-01 15:07:24

Zmaybe
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Re: Agent of Change

Eric, your writing is addictive. I start with a few minutes to spare, figuring I will read a bit now and the rest later.  And then I am reading the last words and wondering how I got through it all in one sitting.  Jeesh, wish my brain worked half as well as yours.  You framed a theme of sorts in the start of the story, then through the chapters you added and let the life of Nick unfo;d and expand.  I admit it, I am addicted and hope this story never ends.  Thank you for sharing your gift.

(posted from Chapter 16)

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#206 2022-07-02 02:31:10

Timberwolf92
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Re: Agent of Change

Spectacular chapter Eric. Looking forward to reading more (hopefully in 31 days.)

(posted from Chapter 17)

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#207 2022-07-03 06:21:35

khyranleander
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Re: Agent of Change

Sigh. So much of the bad I can sympathyze with, so little of the good. Well, at least I don't have enemies even close to the FBI & Mob's league after me... And I *STILL* envy the heck out of this guy!

Naturally, of course. After all, the point of most fiction is to portray lives you find fascinating, if not also eminently desirable.  And we have a pretty dang good example, here, of that last.  And for more than just all the hook-ups thrown Nick's way; frankly, I'm more interested in how it's gonna play out once his tech actually gets out into general society! [Okay, all those hook-ups are dang fun diversions until then...]

Entertaining stuff, Eric. Thanks much!
Khyran

(posted from Chapter 11)

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#208 2022-07-03 07:06:59

Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change

Glad you're enjoying the story.  At least a couple people are...

I believe in stories as temporary escapism.  I've never been one for social commentary in my work.  If I wanted more reality, I'd just look around.  What I want is for reality to go away for awhile.  I'm glad that appeals to you, too.

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#209 2022-07-03 17:01:31

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Can’t wait to find out more about Barbara; both her past and future. Hoping we will be seeing something between Nick and his principal in the next few chapters as Nick seems to need another way to get rid of his tension which looks to be growing at a large rate. As always I enjoyed the chapter.

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#210 2022-07-03 21:06:43

Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change

thehilz wrote:

Can’t wait to find out more about Barbara; both her past and future. Hoping we will be seeing something between Nick and his principal in the next few chapters as Nick seems to need another way to get rid of his tension which looks to be growing at a large rate. As always I enjoyed the chapter.

I will say that you will certainly see the principal in the next chapter.  Exactly what you see of her, you'll have to wait for, but there will definitely be some interaction going on there.

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#211 2022-07-04 21:40:50

Icehawk101
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Re: Agent of Change

Great chapter!  I was wondering how things would work out with his mom.  I hope your muses have been helpful because I am looking forward to the next chapter!

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#212 2022-07-19 18:19:06

chevyzr2
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Re: Agent of Change

Great story so far. I’m glad I was able to donate and get the chapters early. Now the hard part. Waiting on the next chapter lol. Good work sir.

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#213 2022-07-25 02:12:18

Zmaybe
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Re: Agent of Change

Eric, your writing is deeply imaginative.  Not sure where it comes from, but I am glad you are able to let it flow out of your mind into the text we get to enjoy.  Thanks and looking forward to more soon.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#214 2022-07-25 09:45:50

Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change

Zmaybe wrote:

Eric, your writing is deeply imaginative.  Not sure where it comes from...

That's easy.  I'm schizophrenic.  3dlol

(Sorry, the voices in my head told me to say that...)

I'm glad you enjoy the stories.  I've been making up stories to tell friends, or just to entertain myself, since I was a child, so... 40+ years of experience.  Basically, I just never turned my imagination off when I got to be an adult.  I just changed the subject matter.

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#215 2022-09-02 23:53:37

edjueinnest
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Re: Agent of Change

this is great

(posted from Chapter 17)

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#216 2022-09-03 07:58:54

Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change

Glad you're enjoying it.

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#217 2022-09-11 14:00:21

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Re: Agent of Change

Damn that chapter had a huge tone shift part way through. Was doing a lot of laughing before the mole showed up and after that mostly wiping the tears from my eyes. Hoping that the person recovers from the incident. Hate these chapters that really leave me hanging. Great work hope you are able to write more soon.

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#218 2022-09-11 16:08:09

Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change

thehilz wrote:

Was doing a lot of laughing before the mole showed up and after that mostly wiping the tears from my eyes.

Yeah, they're cute little buggers, ain't they?  Always digging around and twitching their little noses...

3dangel

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#219 2022-09-11 16:10:52

thehilz
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Re: Agent of Change

3dlol

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#220 2022-09-12 22:37:51

Timberwolf92
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Re: Agent of Change

Oh my word. That was quite an action packed chapter.

(posted from Chapter 18)

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#221 2022-09-28 02:19:33

Icehawk101
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Re: Agent of Change

Damn, that chapter was nuts!  Can't wait for the next one!

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#222 2022-10-20 03:03:47

Mikenc67
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Re: Agent of Change

This story is addictive.

Spoilers! (Click here to view...)Glad to see Nick's sister is now awake and getting better.

Can't wait for Chapter 20.

Good writing, thanks.

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#223 2022-10-21 04:10:35

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Re: Agent of Change

Mikenc67 - spoilers dude!  Some of us are not past Chap 13.  But, I completely agree ... loving the story

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#224 2022-10-21 05:12:24

Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change

Darkside_6 wrote:

Mikenc67 - spoilers dude!

Okay, so this issue has bugged me long enough.  My fix is not great, but it will hopefully help some people.

I have created a new BBCode for the forum, called "spoiler".  The code here:

Code:

[spoiler]I am text that is initially hidden, so you won't be able to read me without 
making an intentional choice.[/spoiler]

Produces this effect:

Spoilers! (Click here to view...)I am text that is initially hidden, so you won't be able to read me without making an intentional choice.



This is made simple by a new element in HTML5 called "details".  The technical...er... details... 3dangel ... aren't important, just realize that this would have been a lot trickier to do just a couple years ago.

I will make a site-wide announcement about the addition, and information about it has been added to the BBCode help page.

PLEASE NOTE:  This custom BBCode is case-sensitive.  It must be typed in all-lowercase, or it will not work.

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#225 2022-10-23 03:59:58

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I have created a new BBCode for the forum, called "spoiler".

Thanks!

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