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#1 2007-07-16 07:11:16
Jagged Gate, The
The Jagged Gate
I do not write crossovers. And I really don't write fanfiction. This story violates both those rules.
Astrogate Team 3 has unknowingly committed a serious felony while on a mission to another world. Navy JAG is called in to represent the team in their trial. Can they rescue the SEALs of AG-3 without resorting to armed conflict?
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#2 2007-07-16 19:21:57
- kd7mvs
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Re: Jagged Gate, The
Very Nice. As Net Wolf states, not precisely fanfic, but inspired by SG-1 & JAG. Good procedural. Sneaky humor.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#3 2007-07-17 01:22:27
- Eric Storm
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Re: Jagged Gate, The
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback.
Net Wolf
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#4 2007-07-17 02:10:21
- Storymaster69
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Re: Jagged Gate, The
Hey Net,
I just read the story and must say that I really enjoyed it. Yes you took inspiration from a popular show but you very much made it your own story. You left things open enough that you could do more in this universe.
Now wipe that grimace off your face, I'm not pushing 
Do you have any plans to perhaps do more stories surrounding the ASG? If not that is fine but if you do decide to do something more I am sure I will read it and hopefully enjoy it as much as I did this one.
Thank you for once again sharing with us all your stories and may you continue to write more for many years to come.
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#5 2007-07-17 03:03:23
- Neitherspace
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Re: Jagged Gate, The
Admin wrote:
The Jagged Gate
I do not write crossovers. And I really don't write fanfiction.
Well you know cept that one time
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#6 2007-07-17 06:56:23
- Eric Storm
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Re: Jagged Gate, The
If I wanted to be reminded of that story, Neitherspace, I would have it on this site. There are a lot of negative emotions surrounding that story, and I would sooner forget it exists, thanks.
Net Wolf
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#7 2007-07-30 02:33:55
- NahtanoJ88
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Re: Jagged Gate, The
I though that was a quite an entertaining story that has enough of each universe you don't need to explain to much because the basic idea is already there. Being an avid fan fiction reader I found it rather amusing at how you were poking fun at the other universes especially with your blatant saying of this isn't going to be exact at all so deal with it or don't read the story.
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#8 2009-05-10 21:00:10
- JTTbear1
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Re: Jagged Gate, The
A delightful story. And I notice that you left it open for more. While I am a much bigger fan of SG1 than of JAG your not quite crossover was true to the spirit but also quite original.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#9 2009-05-11 00:39:01
- Eric Storm
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Re: Jagged Gate, The
Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I left an opening... but don't expect to see any Jagged Gate stories anytime soon.
Eric
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