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#1 2007-10-03 02:35:34

Bridget
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Blood and Iron

Blood and Iron

Betrayed by his wife and his friend and boss. Hiding out in the north woods, a hermit for the next two years. He's planning on taking the time to heal alone. It doesn't work out quite that way...

This Science Fiction Fantasy story set in the present takes place in a feudal society that practices slavery and indentured servitude. 

The narrative includes Male Domination and Coercion as elements central to that plot.  There is graphic violence that is neither sexual nor gratuitous.  The sex involves multiple partners with elements of BDSM, harem, and orgy.


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#2 2007-10-17 16:33:56

ShadowHawk
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Re: Blood and Iron

Hey Warlord,

It's good to see that you've listed your stories here on Net's Pub.  Glad to see you here.

Hawk

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#3 2007-10-17 21:36:03

WarLord
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Re: Blood and Iron

thanx

appreciate tbe warm welcome


"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946

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#4 2007-11-05 09:07:48

advancewar
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Registered: 2007-02-05
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Re: Blood and Iron

hello warlord i read your storie blood and iron back on ewp and thought it was a  well writen storie i hope to see more of it and  just out of curiosity would you consider drawing a rough map to show the general lay of the land i seemed to...be unable to picture were things wer in relation to other things[i have no concept of distance and direction:(  ] gl and  mabee he can come accross another hunter or  even a traveler from his own dimention i think it would be interesting


life=books

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#5 2007-11-05 09:46:22

WarLord
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Re: Blood and Iron

advancewar wrote:

hello warlord i read your storie blood and iron back on ewp and thought it was a  well writen storie i hope to see more of it and  just out of curiosity would you consider drawing a rough map to show the general lay of the land i seemed to...be unable to picture were things wer in relation to other things[i have no concept of distance and direction:(  ] gl and  mabee he can come accross another hunter or  even a traveler from his own dimention i think it would be interesting

Greetings

Thanx for the note and the kind words

I have a rough little map I use to keep myself oriiented but its hardly nice enough to post - I'll gice it thought how to do it.

Yes there will be some stuff in the next chapter you might like coming soon if i get this November crap under control

Thanx again for your words

Enjoy the journey

WarLord


"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946

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#6 2007-11-25 11:07:46

amart
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Re: Blood and Iron

this is a very nice story, please continue.

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#7 2007-11-28 08:10:35

revdeacon
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Registered: 2007-09-28
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Re: Blood and Iron

"Please, sir, I want some more!!"  --From Oliver Twist

Yo Warlord!!!  Awesome story!!!  Any idea when we'll see more?

Chomping at the bit.

the Rev

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#8 2008-01-05 03:29:18

Alq
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Registered: 2007-11-10
Posts: 19

Re: Blood and Iron

write more blood and iron stories please

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#9 2008-08-15 02:12:45

blacksmith14
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Registered: 2007-10-14
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Re: Blood and Iron

great story,am patiently awaiting more chapters.-

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#10 2008-12-27 03:07:51

ThePirate
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Re: Blood and Iron

and some of are still waiting for more......

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#11 2009-08-29 08:50:41

SnakeEater
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Re: Blood and Iron

An excellent story, I hope you are able to get back to it someday. Real life & writers block are real problems.

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#12 2009-08-30 07:29:37

WarLord
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Re: Blood and Iron

SnakeEater wrote:

An excellent story, I hope you are able to get back to it someday. Real life & writers block are real problems.

Thanx for the note and kind words.

Well real life can be very frikken REAL thats for sure 3dwink

The good news is that maybe we found a problem thats been around a while with luck maybe a solution too

Better days and back to writing

thanx again


"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946

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#13 2009-10-04 09:36:27

SnakeEater
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Re: Blood and Iron

Real life has gnawed on my ass more than once. Been there, done that, & ended up with enough t-shirts to provide sails for a schooner.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#14 2009-10-29 10:17:44

advancewar
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From: New hampshire
Registered: 2007-02-05
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Re: Blood and Iron

/cry want more "throws tantrum" just jk but still eagerly waiting for more 3dbig_smile


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#15 2009-11-28 16:41:31

AvidReader
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Re: Blood and Iron

Great story!  I hope you decide to finish it!

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#16 2010-05-17 23:59:30

bighorny9
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Re: Blood and Iron

Waiting for this adventure to continue

big

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#17 2010-06-13 17:22:45

bighorny9
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Re: Blood and Iron

Well this is surly one of the most interesting stories I have had the pleasure of reading and wish you would add a chapter are two.  Thanks for sharing with us your fans and friends
Big

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#18 2010-12-20 21:05:09

coalbuckety
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Re: Blood and Iron

I promice not to throw a tantrum.  I love your writing.  Have been reading about all you published on the pub and before it changed names.  I hope all things improve for you,  You have a natural talent for this thing.   coalbuckety

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#19 2011-01-27 09:45:22

StoryJunkie
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Re: Blood and Iron

I see that it's been a while sine you added to this story, and I hope that you are able to continue it soon. As others have said it is a very interesting and good story. I hope you are well and things are as such that you can continue this soon.

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#20 2011-08-03 02:16:49

Flamewolf
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Re: Blood and Iron

I can't wait till you add to your lovely story. I like your plot. keep up the great work.

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#21 2012-02-20 04:34:22

wpage
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Re: Blood and Iron

GRAET STORY

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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#22 2012-03-21 20:02:41

grandad_rufus
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Re: Blood and Iron

Please Sir? Can I have some more ?

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)


If they give you ruled paper, write the other way.
Grandad Rufus.

It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints...

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#23 2012-04-24 18:03:27

daishod
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Re: Blood and Iron

very good series so far, can't wait to see where you take it.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#24 2012-11-20 16:18:33

pbakerp
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Re: Blood and Iron

Hi Warlord are you planning to continue the this story?

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#25 2018-01-11 23:41:24

Dezerae
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Registered: 2018-01-10
Posts: 6

Re: Blood and Iron

This is a great story. Thank you for writing it.

(posted from Chapter Thirteen)

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